Esther

@esther-c

Ugh, sorry you’re going through that! That’s hard!

Could you maybe post some segments of it so I can see more of what you mean?

All I can say is that maybe you’re focusing a little too much on all the potential problems. (I’m speaking from experience) Sometimes you need a little break, or maybe you’re overthinking it. If its boring to…[Read more]

@esther-c

What’s the first paragraph of your book?

You’re being a little to ambiguous. I can’t answer your questions until I can glean more data.

Sorry I couldn’t really help. 🙁

@esther-c

Oof, those are hard questions. For the first one, I get what you mean. I think for the first chapter, an introduction is fine. Personally, I would try to focus on the relationship between Ami and Ev, and his family conflict, because I think that will hook the reader.
And then, themes are also really hard. Could you describe yours a…[Read more]

@rae

I like idea of building onto the Lillening world, (I kinda have fallen in love with Fennin! I’m now emotionally attached!)

So you want to see what other people think about it? @savannah_grace @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium what do you think of having an evil guy somewhere pull in some villains to oppose t…[Read more]

@esther-c

Awwww thanks! <3

@esther-c

I’m not sure what other people are thinking about this idea, though, so we should probably wait to here from them.

@esther-c

What I was thinking was that the villains would be in a separate group working directly against the heroes. We wouldn’t have to do it that way, but it might be a lot of characters to keep track of in the main group if we added villains to that.

@rae @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @acancello @keilah-h @esther-c (I think I got everyone)

I just had a spectacularly fiendish idea… What does everyone think of this:

These character fights are so much fun, it will be a shame once that characters are on their quest and can’t keep fighting each other. What if we added…evil characters? I…[Read more]

@esther-c @acancello

Thanks for your prayers! Today I had a really big breakthrough and was able to start writing again, so thank you!

I actually had the breakthrough on the writing sprint, so it went great!

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, @ancello @esther-c Hugo and/or Hedieh should probably get Fennin at some point. These two will kill each other otherwise!

@esther-c

It’s fine, at least someone will stop them if they go too far.

We should do a meme soon…

@esther-c

but the swords you guys are talking about here are probably different than the ones he’s used to using. That would be funny.

Yeah, Nahim is making a crystal sword like he uses, but they’ll probably make some normal weapons too, because they don’t have many materials. We were thinking it would make sense for them to give crystal swords t…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’m usually most active from 7:00-8:00 in the morning, and then afternoons on weekdays, and evenings on Saturdays (central time).

It might make sense that characters with less skill would be given them to compensate, so if @trailblazer, @acancello, and/or @esther-c want crystal swords for their characters, that would work.

@rae @highscribeofaetherium

Oh boy!

*gets popcorn*

@acancello @esther-c

Btw, Hugo and Hedieh are also in this scene. They’re helping.

@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @rae @mineralizedwritings

Snake

“I doubted you would ever fight. I wondered why you were chosen. Now I understand. And to all of you, I will also use my magic to the point of it killing me to protect you. I am loyal to those loyal to me, and you are good and loyal. If Black S…[Read more]

@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @rae @whoever I missed cause i feel like i’m missing somebody

Snake

A fellow prince. And one also with magic, at that.

“I’ll do it.” Snake lashed his tail. “And…..if any of you would to know….”

He opened one hand, letting a few loose objects on the floor swirl toward…[Read more]

Oh, tags, duh.

@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @smiley @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @lydibug @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium

@esther-c

Blogger is OK. I like how its really simple to set up and use, but the only bad part is that you cant have an email subscription button and as far as I know you cant customize your backgrounds and have to pick from the few they have. Its very easy to use though, I haven’t tried any other blogging sites, but have been thinking about…[Read more]