@esther-c
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
“Hey, um… it wasn’t your fault.” He offered her a lopsided smile, quickly pulling his hand away and shoving it into his pocket.
Awwww <3
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Chase Duke
Chase nodded and pulled his hood down lower so his eyes were hidden completely.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Auuggh, that’s going to be so sad! XD But it sounds like a good ending for the story and the character arcs, it’s just… 😭
Anyway, I think if that’s what feels right to you… then do it. It will definitely be more powerful and emotional if Amir dies in Dabir’s place, but personally I feel like a government that would allow that is…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOO! YOU CAN’T KILL AMIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs into my pillow for two hours*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *takes deep breath* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Anyway……
I do like the idea that he’s dying in place of Dabir. I think your idea that it could be part of the law that anyone can willingly take the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?” Lukas asked. He kicked himself. That came out sounding much worse than it sounded in his head. He wished he could take it back, but could do nothing. So he stood there with a pained expression, waiting for Liv’s reply.
I’M DYING!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Livia
“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?”
Liv stared blank…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Chase Duke
“So this is your first time eating pizza. I don’t know how you survive.” Chase finished his first slice and haltingly reached for another, his movements and eyes seeming to ask permission from Fynn every second.
“I-I didn’t – ” Actually, for most of his life he had gone hungry, sometimes he almost reached the point of starv…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I do think that the “dying in place of” is a good idea. Maybe I haven’t read enough, but I think it’s more interesting for someone to give their life for someone else willingly, and not just in a protection way.
(basically, I agree with TheArcaneAxiom)
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
This is really up to you. I like the idea of the giving himself up thing instead of just being in the way though. It would cause a lot of emotional drive for Dabir later on. Not only because Amir saved him, but because he willfully took it upon himself.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Tech
“Yep. I’m the middle child. Which is obvious to anyone who knows me.” The boy chuckled. “I have an older brother and a younger one. Oh, and by the way, my name’s Everton. Feel free to call me Ev.” He reached out to shake Tech’s hand, seemingly unperturbed by the dragon claws.
Tech smiled back at him. “All right, I’ll refer to yo…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Chase Duke
Fynn grabbed Chase’s elbow. Chase tensed, slightly pulling away, but Fynn led him to something that said “pizzeria”.
“Well, my boy, you must find out. Teenagers eat pizza. If you don’t eat pizza, then it’s like not being a teenager. There’s no time to waste.” He ran and got in line, pulling Chase with him. It took them only…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c Thanks!
@everyone else I’m actually not sure where to RP. I think I’m waiting for someone to either go after the creature and kill it, or for someone to hit him hard enough to knock him out. Either way, it’ll free him from its control.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@calyhuge “mea culpa” means “My fault” in Latin, right? It could be roughly translated as “Oh, my bad.”
Tech
“Three brothers? That must be fun.” the boy said, pulling out a suit.
“Five, actually. Two of them are older than I am. And two sisters.” Tech clarified. “What about you? Do you have siblings?”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyone else
I drew Snake being attacked by the creature yesterday! It took me 3 hours lol. I just colored him today.

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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Livia
Livia sat on Xandro’s back as they searched for a food court to eat. Liv was relieved to find ten sapphires in her pocket. She hoped they took Andromedan coins here, and if not, she could ask for credit and pay them back once she got her money transferred into…whatever currency they used here. Regardless, she wasn’t…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I’m a little bit of a freak about getting charrie stuff right, so I often study a character’s replies and manners before attempting them.
Wow, I can’t even spell emerald!
Chase Duke
“I-I guess. I just…never mind.” Chase’s eyes slightly greyed before going black again. He wasn’t sure if he liked the emerald tie,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Thanks!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Wow, that’s great!! So exciting!!
It’s a science fiction mystery about the crew of a ship that crashes on a jungle planet. The main character is the daughter of the ship’s pilot, who died in the crash.
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RAE replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr @jonas @beth-torres @thearcaneaxiom @euodia-vision @esther-c @hybridlore @smiley @trailblazer @whoever
@savannah_grace2009 posted our next prompt:
New Prompt: A person who keeps their emotions bottled up inside/won’t acknowledge their own pain to others.
Who would like to participate so we know? We don’t have a s…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I like your idea, if Callie invites him he’ll go.
@savannah_grace2009 & Esther-c
Chase Duke
“Hey, I don’t look too bad. I think Callie will be impressed.” Fynn admired his outfit in the mirror for another moment, then turned to Chase. “I’m going to change back to my clothes and then we’ll find you something.”
“I-I don’t–” Too l…[Read more]
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