Esther

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Livia

She didn’t know what was wrong with her. She couldn’t stop looking at Lukas. She felt like a creep, but his eyes captivated her like nothing ever had before. She could feel Xandro breathing on her neck from behind her, and she dreaded what he would do next.

She was zoning out, trying to get a grip on her emotions, when Lukas’s…[Read more]

@esther-c

He let his eyes meet Liv’s for a moment, then dropped his gaze back down to his plate.

Awww, I think Lukas has a crush!

AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I FREAKED OUT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! haha! (i managed to stifle my scream of joy XD)

I’m just waiting for Lukas to work up the courage to ask her….or Fynn (or Xandro!!) to force him into it lol!

@esther-c I love that!! 😭

@freedomwriter76 Aww, cool!!

@esther-c

Lukas spotted Liv a few paces away and felt his heart skip a beat.

You should have seen my reaction…I literally screamed, lol! I had to explain to my little brother why I was freaking out and he rolled his eyes!!!! THE DISRESPECT!! lol

Livia

“Oh, thanks,” Livia took the pizza from him. “You didn’t have to,” she said as they made…[Read more]

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Chase Duke

Fynn sighed. “You’re not obligated to come, but if you change your mind, you’re welcome to hang with us.” The words seemed friendly to Chase, but he still didn’t like Fynn’s body language a few moments before.

Chase felt suddenly uncomfortable. He stood, reaching in his pocket and dropping a silver coin on the table by Fynn…[Read more]

@esther-c

Aww I love that! Lukas is great for Xandro XD

Livia

She wandered around the mall for what seemed like an hour but was really only five minutes. She couldn’t understand why Xandro always had to stick his nose into her business…quite literally this time. In a moment she realized that it would be rude to leave her new friends behind,…[Read more]

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Chase Duke

That would be no problem, Chase didn’t have a dorm.

“D-don’t worry, I-I won’t be. I-I…I’ll work in the hallway.” That’s where Chase planned to sleep anyways, why not?

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Chase Duke

Chase could read Fynn’s body language pretty well, judging by their conversation in the store, Fynn was wary of Chase again. Sure, Chase liked Callista, but Callista was Fynn’s girl. He knew what happened when someone suspected that someone else was bucking for his girl, and Chase didn’t want to break Fynn’s nose in…[Read more]

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Tech

“Cool.” said Ev. He grabbed one of the suits from the rack. “I think I found one, I’m going to try it on real quick.”

He came back out a bit later. “I think I found what I want. I’m going to check this one out and go get some lunch. I think I’m meeting up with the girl I’m taking to the dance, but you can join us if you’d…[Read more]

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Snake

What’s thisssss? Small furry thingy?

The thing had noticed someone. The fire-breathing cat?

We need to—-AAAAGHHSHHSSSHH!!! FLAMES!

After that, it really screamed.

Snake screamed too, clutching his hand…[Read more]

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Livia

““Hey, um… it wasn’t your fault.” she felt a touch on her shoulder, and saw Lukas’s breathtaking smile, before managing a quick smile. To her surprise, she was able to keep the tears at bay long enough to push past Lukas and Xandro and walk off to find a bathroom. She couldn’t risk any waterfalls of emotions, not in front o…[Read more]

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Chase Duke

“You are coming to the dance, right? I mean, if you don’t want to, then that’s fine. But it’d be really fun if you could.” Chase tensed.

“I-I don’t know. I have something to wear, but I-I don’t dance.” He shivered, his body still tense. The thought of someone touching him was not welcome. “I-if I come, I’ll just stand in t…[Read more]

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@esther-c

“Hey, um… it wasn’t your fault.” He offered her a lopsided smile, quickly pulling his hand away and shoving it into his pocket.

Awwww <3

@esther-c

Chase Duke

Chase nodded and pulled his hood down lower so his eyes were hidden completely.

@esther-c

Auuggh, that’s going to be so sad! XD But it sounds like a good ending for the story and the character arcs, it’s just… 😭

Anyway, I think if that’s what feels right to you… then do it. It will definitely be more powerful and emotional if Amir dies in Dabir’s place, but personally I feel like a government that would allow that is…[Read more]

@ESTHER-C

NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOO! YOU CAN’T KILL AMIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs into my pillow for two hours*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *takes deep breath* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Anyway……

I do like the idea that he’s dying in place of Dabir. I think your idea that it could be part of the law that anyone can willingly take the…[Read more]

@esther-c

“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?” Lukas asked. He kicked himself. That came out sounding much worse than it sounded in his head. He wished he could take it back, but could do nothing. So he stood there with a pained expression, waiting for Liv’s reply.

I’M DYING!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Livia

“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?”

Liv stared blank…[Read more]

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Chase Duke

“So this is your first time eating pizza. I don’t know how you survive.” Chase finished his first slice and haltingly reached for another, his movements and eyes seeming to ask permission from Fynn every second.

“I-I didn’t – ” Actually, for most of his life he had gone hungry, sometimes he almost reached the point of starv…[Read more]

@esther-c

I do think that the “dying in place of” is a good idea. Maybe I haven’t read enough, but I think it’s more interesting for someone to give their life for someone else willingly, and not just in a protection way.

(basically, I agree with TheArcaneAxiom)