@esther-c
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Okay…part TWO of the sad scene…
Lilitu walked briskly down the dimly lit streets, Sef’s emaciated form in his arms.
Though his foot pained him, he could barely feel it now.
His body thrummed with adrenaline.
She was so weightless….his stomach turned. He could feel every bon…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
It just occurred to me that they’ve known each other for less than a day…. 😐 😂
Sef and Chase have only known each other for half an hour, and at least on Chase’s end, he’s already about asking her to the dance! (I have a grand scheme going on with him)
Xandro still on a sugar high from that candy? XD
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
I think the only thing that wasn’t the best was the color of the words. I liked the font, but I felt like with some of pictures it was hard to read.
Yeah…I was a little worried about that. Thank you for the feedback!
But that’s all. And where do you find all your adorable couple pics???
Uhhh…I wish I could give you some smart ans…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Livia
She smiled as if to reassure him, unsure of what to say.
And then she felt a familiar warmth on the back of her neck.
“Xandro!” she turned around, letting go of Lukas’s hand and hugging Xandro’s neck. He snorted.
“I know, I know, I may have forgotten about you…” she hung her head guiltily. Xandro grabbed Lukas by the…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@freedomwriter76 (you might have to call the protection squad on this one….) @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Here’s a chapter I just wrote…I’m pretty happy with it but it’s SO SAD!!!
“Sef!”
She heard the door crash open upstairs, and her heart plummeted to the soles of her feet.
It was late.
Very late.
The odds that Ive…
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
That’s so cute! I love Ev <3
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
You’re good XD
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Aghh it looks like it also missed @jonas @esther-c @beth-torres in my post. Remind me not to put your tags right after the dash again.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Ok, let’s also figure out which characters are in this.
-Kari
-Ottoline (@savannah_grace2009, are you dropping Marcurious from the RP or bringing him in?)
-Hugo? @acancello you’re still in, right?
–@esther-c (potentially bringing some in?)
–@beth-torres and @rae are either of you sticking around in the party with any of your…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley @jonas @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @keilah-h @acancello @trailblazer @whalekeeper @loopylin @savannah_grace2009
Not finished yet, but I did a vid for Alpha and Emmie after Emmie’s death. Any suggestions?
My two big questions are
- Did I put the pictures to the music okay?
- Is the repetition okay, or does it…
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
OH NO WE FORGOT ABOUT XANDRO!!!!!
If you want…you can RP Xandro finding them, or I can too.
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Livia
Lukas held her hand in his, and Liv fought back a smile. This was where she wanted to be….with Lukas.
She could tell he was nervous–his stutter had returned and he was blushing.
“You don’t have to be nervous,” she reassured him, squeezing his hand, “I’m nervous too.”
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Okay, so we can just pretend all the adventure-y stuff never happened and go back to the dance I guess?? If you guys don’t have any objections…then we can just continue with that.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
That’s a cool idea, too.
Or, if we were going to just bring our characters back, the ones who are still in could just wake up or something and everything that happened was just a bad dream they all happened to have, or a 3D movie or something. Or one of the characters was telling an elaborate story they were all part of, and something…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
I was reading the roleplay to my sister, and she started squealing when Ev and Ami got back together for dance practice XD
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Aww they’re so cute!!
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 *gratefully takes the cookies and tissues* Ty ❤️🥺
Aww!! 🥺 I can’t believe how much detail you put into your villains’ backstories. It makes them so likable in a way I love as a writer but hate as a reader. XD
Awww oh my goodness yes sameeee 😭😂
Also how are you doing girl?? We haven’t chatted in a while ɶ…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Okay…so I’ve been worried about my story becoming too graphic…and I was wondering what you thought of it.
The parts I’m concerned about aren’t until the second part…which is a while away from the first chapter…so if you wanted to jump to those ones (or just give me your thoughts on the other ones) that would be…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
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