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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
OH MY GOSH THIS IS AMAZING!
I love the Wingfeather Saga, and this is just perfect! I can’t think of any critiques to give, or I would totally try to help. When Amatus found Meira like that I was just dying. Which is the exact same thing that happened when Nia started singing it for Podo, so… I think you’ve got the Wingfeather effect…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh my word!! I LOVE that 🤣🤣🤣 Poor November and Pax! 😅
And ARA!! That’s so funny!
Whoa how do you do that?! I love Finn!! He looks so fun!
And Lena is cool! Her eyes don’t look scary! I know how that is tho. One time I tried to draw one of my charrie’s eyes…*shudders* Never again XD
Aww great…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin @acancello @esther-c
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Allison started the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @janellebelovedpig @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkeness6
I was just wondering if anyone on KP still write poetry and/or haiku’s? I was wondering if you wanted to talk about them, share them and critique them for each other! Just let me know!
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Allison started the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @kyrothearcain @janellebelovedpig @landric @booksbyjayna @euodia-vision @everyone who wants to join!
I made up a fun game that we all can play! So its crazy easy… Step one, im going to post a sentence, paragraph, huge piece etc of unfinished work. Then one of you are going to add the next piece…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
@felicity @otherworldlyhistorian @kyronthearcanin @folith-feolin @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @sarahsmile @godlyfantasy12 @sarafini @gwyndalf-the-wise @freedomwriter76 (Whenever your back Freedom in case your interested) @anyone-and-everyone
Hi Everyone! As some of you have figured out, I’m a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @whoever-else
Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:
Kirah sat at a long wooden table, in between Cora and Leif. Amara sat across from her, as did Banner, Rollan, and Elryn. She hadn’t yet touched the food in front of her. The visions had stolen her appetite away, and t…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Definitely! I’m a lot better at books where I’ve written the character for a long time, so with these new characters it was somewhat difficult- especially with at least three POVs.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah I noticed that lol. Especially Amara and Kirah I feel like are really similar. I think Tali seems similar at first, but she branches off pretty quickly.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, Brycen’s gonna be pretty cool. Oh man, if I say anything else it will be a massive spoiler, so I’ll just keep my mouth shut XD
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Light Warrior Pen replied to the topic Questions On Blogging in the forum Non-Fiction 3 years, 5 months ago
You’re welcome! I like your ideas for content. 😃
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c You’re welcome!!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @janellebelovedpig @keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @acancello @all those I’ve forgotten lol
Here’s Brycen’s first POV for Chapter 3:
Brycen ducked under a tent flap, moving swiftly and silently. A black cloak followed behind him, the hood up to hide his face. In his hand was a necklace- expensive, with some kind of…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Thank you all for the prayers! The move has been going great! We leave in 5 days! Saying goodbye to everyone has been hard, but better because I know I will see them again. I just wanted to let you all know that I will be on…[Read more]-
You’re so welcome!! Aw, that’s great!! Okay sister! I’ll continue to pray for you and your family. No worries girl! I probably won’t be on much this week either. Talk to you then! ❤
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I’m glad it’s going well! I hope you have a blessed week!
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You’re so welcome!! I’m so glad everything’s going well for y’all! 😀 I’ll continue to keep you in my prayers! ❤️
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Praying hard for you!! I know this is difficult, but you know the Author of your story. Keep us updated! ❤️
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks so much!!! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
Yeah, I figured I’d have to move some stuff around once the drafting was done. But hey, I’ll just surprise myself and magically have double the chapters that way XD
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in
And here’s part 3:
All day long Little One tried to catch Loving Prudence alone, but the siblings always seemed to be around. Then just before supper Little One saw her chance.
As Little One stepped into the kitchen, Loving Prudence looked up from her…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Alright! I’m just gonna keep the chapters on here instead of making a different forum, so ignore the name. 🤣
Tags: @janellebelovedpig @felicity @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else
Definitely let me know if Nia went way off the rails… I’m not the greatest at… I don’t know what to call it. Villian writing? She’s not exactly a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
👍!!!
Thanks! I definitely was kind of experimenting with a lot of different things that I normally don’t do in my writing… Like prophecy, and more POVs than I’m used to. Throughout the next few chapters, more are added in, including the male POV. I think something I’ve also done is made a lot of the characters…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c Ha, cute historical figure drawings! I like that. They look like they could be covers for a children’s series about famous people.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @anyone-else-and-the-people-I’m-probably-forgetting 😅
Okay, y’all, so I know this is kinda long (and also I have way to many novel ideas), but this is the first chapter to a book I’ve been thinking about. So… I figured I’d just share it to…[Read more]
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It looks great! Thanks for sharing! I’ll totally listen to it if I get the time. 🙂
Can’t wait to discuss it if and when your able to tune in!
Sounds cool sadly if all goes well I will be in New York watching Sweeney Todd during that time. If there is a way to watch it later I might check it out.
No worries! Yeah, you’ll be able to watch it whenever you’re able! The link I gave, BYUtv, and YouTube are probably the best ways to watch it during and after the live sessions, so there’s many ways to watch it any time!
Unfortunately, our area just suffered a tornado, so I will not be able to watch it live, as we are helping with the damage. However, I will definitely watch it as soon as I am able. 🙂
Oh No! I hope everyone is ok, we’ll keep you and everyone else over there in our prayers!
Thank you so much! Unfortunately, three people died when the airport was destroyed, and our friend’s house was destroyed, but they are okay.
Oh no! I’ll be praying for you! ❤️
Thank you!!!
That’s so sad, It’s awesome that your able to serve them though, you’re in our prayers!
Ok, thanks for the invite! 🙂
I’m glad I’ve been able to edify and encourage you in your faith! 😀
You really have😀
Thanks for this resource! I will try to check this out when I have time. I’ve appreciated our discussions and have learned so much from them. Thank you for your willingness to listen and your thoughtful responses!
I’ve learned a lot too! The discussions we’ve had have been so fun and edifying. I can’t wait to talk more soon, and maybe discuss this when you get the chance to listen to it. I really loved Saturday 3rd session, and all of Sunday’s were amazing! Can’t wait to hear any thoughts!
I did watch through the first session and was struck by the inspiring speaking. Also the choir was amazing.
Yay! Which was your favorite speaker? I loved all of them, but I think Elder Eyring’s the most for the first session. Yeah, the tabernacle choir is beautiful, I think I take it for granted sometimes.
Maybe Mr. Stevenson? I appreciated how he wanted to do something more meaningful with his family for Easter.
@felicity
Yeah, I love Elder Stevenson!