Esther

@savannah_grace2009

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@savannah_grace2009 I’m liking it so far!!
I would say things are going a little fast, but that’s not you, it’s how fast I can read.
I love your character and place names, they’re really cool. And each new main character you introduce is really interesting!

I have a story idea which is kinda similar to yours in terms of genre and…[Read more]

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@esther-c

Don’t get your hopes up girl! Ellette kills approximately every character who ever existed 🤣🤣

@esther-c

Do you really want to know?

@esther-c

I’m glad some of what I said was helpful! I’m excited to see what you end up doing in your story.

@esther-c

😂😂🤣

@esther-c

Okay, end of February it is!!!! XDXD

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, sounds good!

@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

@esther-c

Ahhh that’s so funny lol

Livia

“Thanks,” she exhaled hard. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to dump all this on you. But yeah, that’s why I’ve been acting weird.”

@koshka ooooh very cool!!

@smiley good idea

I rarely go onto those sites too and if I do it’ll be specifically for a fic that has no shipping or that I’ve researched and know it’s clean shipping

and ugh I knowwwww nobody ever finishes their fanfics

like I read this one a little while ago that had a good plot and the characters were pretty accurate to the original…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I wouldn’t mind!

kinda like how the Half-life games and Portal games are technically in the same universe but what you do in one has literally no bearing on the other.

(sorry for that seemingly random analogy, I was busy writing a fanfic using that story universe earlier, possibly a sequel to my TF2 one)

@rae oh okay, cool!!

@keilah-h

He’s still a character of Wond, but otherwise he’s unrelated to my other stories.

@keilah-h @theshadow

okay so I will say that I completely agree with the fanfiction thing, likes it’s awful what they put in there

of if I ever go onto the websites I put it at lowest and sometimes the second lowest age rating cause anything above that is awful

but overall I just don’t go on them cause nobody ever finishes them anyways lol…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, I’d love to. I’m not great at suggestions/critique, but I’ll do what I can to help.

@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Thank you for the feedback! I’m about to go edit the short story the scene is in, so this will be very helpful.