Esther

@rae

You’re welcome!

Ah, ok thanks for the explanations 👍

@the_lost-journal

lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you for the critique! You gave me some very helpful feedback.

Just a couple things to address so you don’t have to keep wondering

The second and third sentences seem to imply that Max’s only non-human feature is that his eyes are full of emotion. That doesn’t seem like a necessarily inhuman trait. Do I understand cor…

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@ellette-giselle

RAE THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! YOU ARE AN INSANELY AMAZING AUTHORESS! Oh wow! This is so good! The characters, the world, the personalities, the dialogue, the description!!!!!  I COULD GO ON FOREVER!!!!!!!!!

Wow, thanks.

I wasn’t expecting that enthuastic of a response.

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Yay! It’s back!

Celerant: I was born for politics. I have great hair and I love lying.

@koshka

Oh good!

Well, I obviously took those with artificial light. XD At least they finally came through. Any thoughts? 😁

@ellette-giselle @koshka @keliah-h @hybridlore @theducktator

Ok everyone! Last night I tried to share the character concept art, but apparently it didn’t go through. I’m going to try sharing them again now.

@koshka

Oh goodness, that’s not much time. *dashes off to do chores*

@stephie

When I was about eleven years old, I met a friend who wasn’t the most amazing influence. She didn’t like religion (there’s that word again!) and I became persuaded that I was bisexual and perhaps nonbinary. Then, we began going to the French Catholic parish we’re currently part of. However, I slowly came to the truth. I was baptize…

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@ellette-giselle

The best church time I have had is when our church went underground during COVID. We wanted to honor the government, yet not when they banned us from meeting, because that goes against God’s commands.

Wait…Are you in the United States? Or not?

@savannah_grace2009

Personally I don’t think it’s wrong to say it’s not a religion……

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium

Third story! This should fill in a few gaps from the second

 
A Visitor in the Night
“’Suuuuuuch is…the faaaaaaate of the eh-vil–”

“Not /eh/. Look, there’s a vowel after the /v/, so it’s…C’mon, you’re almost done,” A mother coaxed her young son.

“/Ee/! Ee-vil-do-er.’ Evil-doer, right?” Simeon…[Read more]

@rae

I haven’t read the second part yet, but I’ll critique the first section first.

Keep in mind that this is all my opinion, and you can ignore what you want.

Your first sentence is good. I don’t have any critique for it.

The second sentence has a couple things.

Halfbreed of man and elf, Max lacked the pointed ears and the knifelike sharp…

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@the_lost-journal

It is supposed to say they usually hang out at their own house, and are not seen out in the open lol!

WHAT IS THISSSS
IT’S EVEN MORE ACURRATE
AHHH I LOVE IT SO MUCH

THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH

@whalekeeper

oh wow.

yeah no I know not everyone should be getting death threats who leads. Our pastors aren’t currently being hunted or threaten, but it was just the general idea that so many churches and pastors and believers don’t take their faith seriously

@elishavet-pidyon

I thought it was 10 am est?

Y’all. This is sad.

I’ve put aside most of my fun reading during January to focus on things. And I just realized. One of my family checked out The Screwtape Letters in my favorite audio book version. (And it’s due in 16 minutes.)

*Marianne level sobbing*

Just kidding. XD

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@theduckator

Idkkkk

Personally I don’t think it’s wrong to say it’s not a religion…

But we also have different denominations and my church has done sermons where my pastor has taught that Christianity is a “relationship, not a religion” so it could just be how I was raised. I respect your opinion and I’m not going to judge you or anything j…[Read more]