Esther

@loopylin

I’m good with moving a day forward, if I can roleplay Barnes concluding this side-adventure first. :] I’ll get to it in the next couple hours.

@koshka Hold on, I think everyone (at least the active people) needs to agree to move to the next day first. There are people role playing inside where there’s light, but no not during day yet.

@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c

Is it alright with everyone if we move on to the next day?

I think we could fudge the…[Read more]

I’m assuming your story is at least the normal level of serious. Like, it might be funny at times, but it’s not a comedy as the whole point, right?

@grcr you’re welcome! Honestly, your original art style wasn’t THAT bad, but I’m assuming Roblox-y characters wasn’t the original intent of your story, so the new one does serve to humanize them and make them more believable in a serious story.

That’s kinda weird and made more sense in my head, but ehh.

@linus-smallprint Awesome cover! And Ellette is right–most drawing programs I know allow you to add a picture to your canvas and trace over it. I’ve done it lots of times.

@loopylin

He doesn’t actually want to kill anyone, but he’s a walking disaster so the middle works, lol

Yep

Rory totally looks like a cinnamon roll. I mean, I haven’t seen a picture of him, but he totally gives off cinnamon roll vibes

I also debated the ‘could actually kill you’ because could he actually? My sister said Rory would pop emotional…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow

And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.

@theshadow

Thank you!!

@whalekeeper

Thanks!! So glad you like it! 😁 And hey, if you have tips, I know you’re the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.

@rae

Oh my goodness! I love that!!

I must have it! lol.

@raxforge

Oh dear. That’s hilarious!

@loopylin

Want a picture of him? (It’s when he’s older in the actual novel that he’s in.)

@koshka  @whalekeeper

Rory

Rory curled up, letting his face disappear under the comforter. It was warm and soft. Unlike the military blankets he was used to. He wondered if this was what clouds felt like. Then he shuddered. He knew what clouds felt…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t think @the_lost-journal was saying that the teachings of the saints are superior to the Bible. I think he meant that they were another source of instruction.

@whalekeeper @koshka That whole “where does Dante go?” discussion was very amusing to read.

He doesn’t actually want to kill anyone, but he’s a walking disaster so the middle works, lol

@ellette-giselle

Rory totally looks like a cinnamon roll. I mean, I haven’t seen a picture of him, but he totally gives off cinnamon roll vibes

@linus-smallprint

I do like your art style. Is this a character from one of your WIPs?

Thanks!

Not yet, but I would love to turn it into a story. Maybe some sort of dark fairytale/ redwall kind of thing. I’ve been thinking about it a lot. No solid ideas, though.

@grcr I love the improvement! Those look so good! I love how you see all three distinct personalities in their faces even though they’re all smiling

@grcr wowww that’s such an improvement! They look great!

@the_lost-journal oh that is a pretty font!!

@raxforge ok but that kinda is what he said though lolllll

@rae haha!! I should get a sign like that.

@raxforge

People join and leave and join again. You’re free to start interacting anew with anyone you want, as long as you ask first, or you can decide to stop. 🙂