Esther

@the_lost-journal

They all sound so interesting!

*glares at you* you must finish them ALL and publish them–

*glares harder* Don’t you abandon a SINGLE ONE

What the–

I would edit that post but I think it is way too funny that I tried to tag you with your username. Anyway, @the_lost-journal

Look up XD

@kefa

“Carrot Cake lights a match and sets the hospital ablaze, she smiles to herself.”

Are you okay? XD

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, well, I am reading! *Shoves all the motivation your way* I will give you some comments and some in-depth thoughts! Hopefully these are what you’re looking for.

Comments (as I’m going through) –

– Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

– Prose flows smoothly…[Read more]

@keilah-h

It’s in the update on her profile. 🙃

@the_lost-journal

oop, uhh, I will make a topic for it!!!!!!!!!

Sounds good😂

Nice, because I know other denominations just forgive to one another… 😬 that sounds worse.

And of course, we should reconcile ourselves with our fellow man, especially those we have wronged, but man cannot forgive sin, only God, and by extension those He’s given a…[Read more]

@theducktator

You know you’re a writer when you come back from camp thinking about all the people you met and what parts of them are going in a book. I can finally picture one of my character’s hair now!

Haha I definitely have put real people into my stories before…. Mostly strangers who had interesting quirks or personalities or something abou…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

This sounds interesting! I’m excited to hear more!

now you gotta put a chili pepper in a random scene somewhere as a joke.

Also I agree with @keilah-h, that would be really funny!

You know you’re a writer when you come back from camp thinking about all the people you met and what parts of them are going in a book. I can finally picture one of my character’s hair now!

@ellette-giselle sounded like it!

I recognized “ace” from an Australian book series about dogs; the main dog character calls his mate that once or twice when he’s talking about her, implying that she’s the very best. It stands to reason that’d be a British thing too, and it certainly sounds like somethin that’d come out of the WWI time period.

@keilah-h

what?!? google is dumb. lololololol.

That’s OLD British slang. (came about in WWI)

It means “awesome.”

@the_lost-journal

I knew you would say that 😂

What can I say? You know me.

There should be more people named CARROT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe look up words meaning carrot in various languages, that might work.

Where exactly is the link again? I seem to remember it was on an external document or something rather than being posted directly on KP.

@ellette-giselle haha!!

Not as familiar with that one, and google search brought up nothing, but I’m guessing it means that’s good.

@savannah_grace2009 yay!

@keilah-h

yes, actually!!!!!

I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!

Cracking Ace!

@savannah_grace2009 yep!

Got any more of your story yet?

I haven’t been checking, sorry.

@keilah-h

aw yesss

@ellette-giselle I love it. You can use British and Aussie expressions around me whenever you want!