Esther

@liberty

WHAT IN THE WORLD!!!

Oh you’re gonna pay for that.

If they’re tent is full up maybe we can snag one together if I join.

@hybridlore

Wait…is that tent already filled? I can’t see it as one of the tents to pick.

@hybridlore

I will ask to join that tent!

@hybridlore

I would love LOVE to join that writing camp!

@hybridlore FINALLY!!!!!!! The next and last part of -Snowballs- is here! Thanks for reminding this procrastinating person.

Anyway…I am planning to write a sequel…just because Dale has had such a hard time! (I feel so bad for him…poor boy) So, I’m hoping to write another story where he’s recovered from his trauma and is having a good t…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

idk why it’s unfortunate that the first is true for you! It’s true for me too! 😁

The drawings are coming along. I started all three last night. I threw away the one for theducktator because she didn’t turn out the way i wanted her to, so I’ll have to start over. I finished Hybridlore’s, and Carrot Cake is almost done. I like…[Read more]

@loopylin

*gaspeth!*

Rory lost his date!

Hahahah!!!

Not that dancing would have been good for him. He would have freaked out and killed something or run……… buts still. It’s the principle of the matter. *British sniff*

lololololololol

@loopylin

That blasted group is constantly threatening me and stealing my characters. *crosses arms indignantly*

lolololol

And, I’m sorry, but after meeting you in person, you’re too sweet to be a psychopath <3

Aw, thanks!! That’s so kind of you! 🙂

It’s a title I earned on KP after threatening a character Highscribe liked. XD I guess I’m…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay…. yes that about matches them!

You haven’t mentioned their biggest character difference which is a slight flaw for each of them.  We’ll see if it gets picked up later on. 😉

@hybridlore

NOTHING! XD

I just told someone to kill off a character that she happened to like……

@esther-c

Sorry I’m just now getting to this!!!!

My main critique would be that you spend a lot of time on dialogue. I kind of feel like we just got thrown into the story and all we know about the characters is because of what they say. Maybe breaking up some dialogue and really showing us who they characters are would help…it kind of feels l…[Read more]

@koshka @raxforge

Ellie 

“Great!” Eddie winked at Syph. “Now you just need to get yourself a girl.”

Rax turned to Ellie, “What about you, do you have a partner?”

She looked surprised. Her attempt to stay unnoticed by her classmates had failed quickly.

“Yes,” she said softly. “My friend Marcel.”

@ellette-giselle

Anti protection squad

This got me laughing out loud pretty hard XD

And, I’m sorry, but after meeting you in person, you’re too sweet to be a psychopath <3

@ellette-giselle

Poor Highscribe. What did you do to her?

@ellette-giselle

Leon is definitely more confident and the leader. It feels like Julian looks to him and gets more concerned about things. And Julian likes to make quips. That was just what I think I noticed from this chapter.

@koshka

Oh my goodness. Love it.

@hybridlore

That title was given to me by a very distressed Highscribe and I bare it proudly.

@hybridlore

Okay I can change that. It won’t do anything to the plot.

Lol 😂😂 I like Roland

haha, me too.

Poor Leon. He is now stuck with two impulsive companions.

Also, I’m starting to see the personality differences between Julian and Leon and I love them 😍

ME TOO!!!!!

Just out of curiosity and to see if I’m getting everything across, w…[Read more]