Esther

@savannah_grace2009

Ah, yes… Fire Face😂 The name is so weird yet I’ve made no attempts to fix it XD. Writing the burning of the castle was fun😆

@linus-smallprint

Considering the circumstances, I don’t think the above will go through his mind. I think he’ll run there because that’s the only place he can go really, and he’s going to be having a really, really hard time. It’s going to be surprising if he thinks clearly enough to get back there without getting lost or injured. Then he gets…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Is it bad that it was reversed?

I’m not convinced by Julian telling Dian the gospel in that moment

Ugh.

I had that feeling as I was editing it.

Hmm…. I might possibly chuck that section altogether………..

So is it bad that Julian responded differently?

Well….. I think that might be because that tends to be w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That’s insane, but yeah, at least the class all knew it was wrong. Thanks for the inspiration!

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah, it’s rough, I feel you. Exactly, it’s just that sometimes the things that feel so big to us don’t matter so much to other people, or they’re too hard to explain.

Okay, sounds good! Hopefully someday we can plan one you’ll be able to make. 😊

@esther-c

I’m loving this story! It has a warm and cozy feel but also real challenges high schoolers face.

Easton brought his sand bike to a halt a few feet from the campfire the rest were beginning to set up. He removed his helmet, shaking out his hair.

OK I was majorly confused here at first- I didn’t know who “the rest” was referring to until…[Read more]

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Leon woke in the darkness. He heard Rolf breathing and felt the rocking of the ship below him. He sat up, wondering where they were going and what fate lay ahead. Leon leaned against the side of the ship’s hold and drew his knees to his chest,…

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@linus-smallprint

The drawings are great! Especially love the one with Alan and Martha

@liberty

I think so! Send it!

@whalekeeper

Wyoh keeps eating whatever I have to say…*copies this post*

Anyways, I’m interviewing you for Potato News 64 so check that out XD

@ellette-giselle

Yes! That song really goes up and down. Have you learned “Not Alone”? (the most epic Christian girl song ever…)

@stephie

*Laughs* Sounds like you know how to steel the show.

@whaley

Those are hilarious–

Are we sure that superhero has good intintions?

@liberty

Yeah I know. At first I could never see it fitting, but the more I listened to it the more I kept thinking about these guys, (specifically Leon for some reason) so now it has to be the book theme song, because I think about them every time. 😂

Ah, I get it.

We didn’t do Aladdin because of the clothing the girls are wearing. I have…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh! Okay.