Esther

@ellette-giselle ok thanks!

@keilah-h

I think you’re on Chapter 40.

@ellette-giselle I was just about to tell you I haven’t caught up in a while. Which chapter was the last one I commented on? I should be able to get to it today or tomorrow.

@keilah-h

Thanks! I appreciate that.

btw, have you seen the new chapters?

@ellette-giselle thank you!!

I always try to ask before doing that kind of thing these days.

@keilah-h

Sure thing!!!

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome. Mind if I take the meme to post on my youtube channel on the 4th? They might find it funny.

@keilah-h

Thanks!!!!

hahahahaha

@ellette-giselle PEAK MEME LOLLLLLLL

I love that.

now, to prevent Soldier from deciding the cookies are for him and eating them all (and getting sick afterward)

@highscribeofaetherium

Yay! That was a perfect one for number 4,000!

@ellette-giselle

Of course! XD

Also, you hit 4,000 posts!!

lol, yes!

TO EVERYONE

A few tags

@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore  @theducktator @whalekeeper  @rae

@ellette-giselle

Here’s the last story as it is now. I made a few changes during CEW, but I don’t think I made many

A breeze swept over the countryside, traveling over the hills and through the meadows, before stopping to tangle a young woman’s hair at the command of the man who sat in the grass beside her.

“Baron! Why?” She whined, trying to st…

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@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power

NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*sits back and smiles*

@rae

awesome!

Tag me when you do!

not chapter, story *facepalm*

@ellette-giselle

If you want, I would be happy to mark that chapter up for you and give a few spots where it felt emotionally lacking to me as the reader.

That’d be great! I already have made some changes to the first part of the chapter, so I’ll head over to The Baron Chronicles topic and repost the chapter.

@rae

I know!! That quote is just AMAZING!!! I would love to see more of him!

Yes, it was a little bit flat in places, and maybe it could use some reworking, but honestly I think 1st person would spoil it. I liked all the scenes you had and the way you laid it out, even if it could use a teeny bit of work. That’s what I’m trying to say.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

np

but I honestly really liked that chapter the way it is. Like, a LOT. I don’t want you to touch it. If it’s the chapter I’m thinking of (the end one) it was one of my very favorites.

Yes, the end one. This is very interesting to me, cuz I honestly like the last short story the least. Not because of the story itself (the conce…[Read more]