Esther

In Which Orcs Stink, and Dwogin Plays Hockey

Chapter 6

“Cowards and kettledrums!” Dwogin bellowed. His axe sprang into his hand and the stout warrior went charging into the first line of the ambushment. Orcs flew like flies over a hotly contested piece of garbage. I gagged.

In the chaos that ensued, I caught a glimpse of Onnendel and Tra…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yep! I think Canada’s big enough that it doesn’t count as revealing my location online…

 

@linus-smallprint

nope, I have two brothers and 1 sister.

 

I honestly think that it’s not good to have that big of a congregation. We’re called to fellowship with the believers and uplift, encourage, and hold one another accountable. I find that hard to do when you don’t know the people in your church. *shrug* that’s just my opinion.

@linus-smallprint

 

Good, I’m glad you understand what I mean.

 

oh I think we have about………… 100 kids and young adults and maybe 25 parents. (our family of 6 is the smallest family in the church. the average is about nine kids,)

@koshka    @whalekeeper

YAY!!!!! I was literally just thinking about this!

 

Rory

Rory lowered his gaze. “You’ve seen me fight. I’m skilled. And that’s without a weapon. Give me a gun or a knife………” he shrugged. “They trained me well. I’m skilled and I’m dangerous. They want me to continue to fight for them, to train other to be like me…[Read more]

@rae

Ooooooo!!! CHILLS! I love it so much!!!! I sense a redemption story and those are my favorite!!!

@liberty

yeah, my poor characters are about to all receive knee injuries…………………

 

Thank you for the prayers!

@stephie

*screeches* I’ll get you for this! After I write a bunch of words…*sobs*

@loopylin

Inky magic system

This is probably the coolest magic system I’ve ever heard of.

@keilah-h

BTW how’s that drawing of Soldier going?

I wasn’t able to print the reference pictures until this morning. Currently, I’m thinking over posing.

My brother took the pictures and asked what it was. He had a good laugh over Soldier’s grin as he teleports bread lol. I’m gonna try to get him to read your fanfic, I think he’d like it a lot.

@ellette-giselle Here you go.

@keilah-h @highcribeofaethum

Fourth story!

 

 
Brutus
I am a hideous monster. I have taken so many lives, caused so much pain. And why? Why did I do it all? To please Father. To feel like I belonged and had purpose. That I was worth something. My true parents abandoned me, Father took me in. I had to prove to him…[Read more]

Stepheroni and Cheese’s magic system, rephrased by AI in the style of Kraft Dinner microwave instructions:

 

Microwave Instructions for Magic System Rant

Open up your world: Qanti, the creator, originally made humans just like ours, but then an angel (who’s probably evil, can’t remember the name) convinced them to ask for Qanti’s power. Qan…[Read more]

@the_lost-joural

That’s totally fine!

*takes back the snowballs*

I suppose I’ll throw them at…

 

 

 

 

 

*drum roll*

 

 

 

 

 

 

@theducktator x18 !!!

@grcr

Okay!

@ellette-giselle

Oh NO!!! I knew someone would be slipping with all this snow and ice…but I had no idea it would you be!!!

I’m definitely praying for you! Get better soon!!!!

Although…in one way this is a good thing…since you’ll be able to include my story…but I’m totally not saying that was a good reason for you slipping.

@rae

*excited clapping*

@ellette-giselle

Thank you for pointing that out.

 

I’ll post the next story hopefully later today

I guess I have a magic system, but it’s more a power system. In my KoS/Shattered Kingdoms series, there are unseen powers behind almost everything. Influences from the races of the Lighted and the Faded on the race of Blood. (Made the names up on the spot. XD) It’s pretty obviously allegorical, but I’m having fun developing it as if it’s not so I…[Read more]

Oh yeah, this is also a great article: https://booklaurie.com/blog/the-psychology-of-creating-characters/

@rae

thank you so much, rae!!