@esther-c
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
This paragraph had a lot of they do this than that. I would try to replace some of it with descriptions of them doing this, like idk maybe Ev’s shoes slide in the gravel as he makes his way down? Maybe the cave was dark, and they come out into the moonlight? I wasn’t able to envision the kinda “vibe” of the setting…
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Esther posted a new activity comment 3 years, 2 months ago
You’re so welcome!!
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Esther replied to the topic Writing an Article? in the forum Non-Fiction 3 years, 2 months ago
Yw!! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @anyone-else
Could some of y’all read this chapter to see if it’s realistic and paced well. I know it’s only the second draft, but I’d like to get some feedback specifically on this chapter.
Ev couldn’…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Writing an Article? in the forum Non-Fiction 3 years, 2 months ago
I’ve been thinking about writing an article as well. I don’t know what topic you could do, but I’ve been told that it’s a good idea to do something that you’re passionate about and that you know well.
I asked @kathleenramm about writing an article a little while ago. She should be able to give you some pointers. I know that [Read more]
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Esther posted a new activity comment 3 years, 2 months ago
And yes, give me Irish castles and accents any day! 😂 (Or most foreign accents really. XD)
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Esther posted a new activity comment 3 years, 2 months ago
Thanks so much!! That means a lot! 😊
The name Aletheia is Greek, actually, and it has to do with truth, because Aletheia was founded on truth. By this point though, it has strayed drastically. 😅 -
Esther posted a new activity comment 3 years, 2 months ago
Yes, Ev is so awesome!! 😁 And don’t worry, he comes to the truth eventually. 🥲 (After multiple near death encounters, someone else dying, and through the encouragement of his best friend 🙃)
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Esther replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years, 2 months ago
LOL! I love those!! 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Well…hello… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
Welcome back, @seekjustice!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, amateur writer!!
So cool that you’re a dog trainer! I love dogs!! 🥰
Ahhh!! You have Aussies!! That’s one of my favorite dog breeds! (The other is Siberian huskies. I have one so… I’m biased. 😁)
Also really awesome that you…[Read more]
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Esther posted a new activity comment 3 years, 2 months ago
I’ll be praying for you!! 🙏🏻❤️
I can’t say I personally know how it feels to move, but I know how it feels to go through a lot of change. 🙂 Thank the Lord that He is faithful and He never changes, even though our lives and situations do. 😀 He’s always there for you!! 😊 -
Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
AWW Thank you girl!! Sorry it took so long 😆😅
Yw!!! ❤️
You’re good! 😊
So I just search like ‘girl with blonde hair and blue eyes’ or something, sometimes I’ll be more specific, sometimes I just leave it like that. And then, scroll and scroll until you find a picture that you like. Then sometimes, I’ll go on Pinterest and look…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Wowzers! That looks epic!! 😆
I’m guessing this book is centered mostly around Jocelyn and Nyx?
It looks so amazing!!! 😄 I love it!
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Yw!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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They are my underground Anti-Nazi resistance group!!! They’re local, mostly only in the area/town Riker is in/works in, and the leader is Ezekiel Gessner, a pastor of a local church. 😉
That sounds so cool!!
Here’s the main members of the Violet Iris’, all on a character board!!! 😏: (some come at later point…
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Esther posted a new activity comment 3 years, 2 months ago
So, it’s called The Endoxos Trilogy. Right now I’m working on book one titled Ember of Hope. Here’s the unofficial blurb for the whole trilogy:
They’ve been trapped inside The Orb for twenty years. It covered all of Aletheia. But it slowly closes in on the nation. The people stuck inside have no way to communicate to those outside. Familie…[Read more]
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Esther posted a new activity comment 3 years, 2 months ago
Yes! It’s awesome how many homeschoolers are on here!! 😀
That story sounds really cool!! I know what you mean by trying to summarize your book. XD Mine centers around a journey too, so a lot happens. 😁 (I’ll share what it’s about in a second post cuz it may be kinda long 😜)
Side characters seem to often steal the author’s heart, don’t they? ;)…[Read more]
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@esther-c Fr they do!! We just can’t help it 🥲
Aww he sounds so lovable! Nooo more charrie trauma 😭
Oh yes, the castles have gotta be amazing 🤩. I’ve toured a castle here in the states once before and it was sooo cool. YES the accents are so great, I love hearing different people’s accents hahah
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Yes, Ev is so awesome!! 😁 And don’t worry, he comes to the truth eventually. 🥲 (After multiple near death encounters, someone else dying, and through the encouragement of his best friend 🙃)
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And yes, give me Irish castles and accents any day! 😂 (Or most foreign accents really. XD)
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@esther-c Aw well that’s good. (Oh yikes 😬)
Same here girl! XD
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Yes! 😊 (Ikr. Writing multiple near-death encounters… just me being a normal author, am I right? 🤣)
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Exactly, we all do it 🤣🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Any bloggers? in the forum Non-Fiction 3 years, 2 months ago
Somehow totally missed your reply. 🤦🏻♀️
Anywho…
Really? That’s SO cool! I live in the Northeast part of the state. Wby?
It’s actually the total opposite for me. I live in the southwest. XD
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Yeah, Ami is so sweet!!!! ❤️❤️❤️(ahh…the poor dears! ❤️😥😅😂)
I know!! 🥰🥰
Yeah… But ya know, I guess it has to happen once or twice when you’re being chased by the government. 😂
XD
(I mean…there’s not a whole lot of people left…it’ll probably be the sequel…but…I mean…maybe someone can go…😅😂 But I don’t need ANOTHER charrie kidnapp…
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Girl this sounds amazing!! And there are even some parallels with my WIP too which I thought was cool haha, love that for us XD. I also gotta say, your names are soooo good, I love Aletheia for the name of a country and the way it’s spelled too 👌🏽👌🏽. To me the spelling of names is as important as the pronunciation so you have my approval lol!…
Thanks so much!! That means a lot! 😊
The name Aletheia is Greek, actually, and it has to do with truth, because Aletheia was founded on truth. By this point though, it has strayed drastically. 😅
Ofc! 💖
Oh really, that’s so cool! I love it when names in books have meanings behind them that relate to the story. In RQ, the allegorical equivalent for sin is a disease called Hathiat, which is amharic (the language from Ethiopia) for sin!
Cool!! I like using different languages for things in my WIPs!