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@euodia-vision

Exactly. 😉

@hybridlore

I’m definitely going to do another draft. XD I think my long-term plan is to have the whole trilogy in the final draft (or the last book close to the final draft) before any of it is published.

@keilah-h

I think it kinda falls in between the two. The technology is more advanced (at least outside the Orb), so that is the futuristic p…[Read more]

@orangearmadillo

Ooo awesome!! I’ll definitely be sticking around! 😀

@hybridlore

Yep! I can guarantee that the second draft is much better. XD I’m not fully done with it yet, but it’s still ending up a lot better (in my opinion) than the first draft. 😉

@hybridlore

Thanks! I kinda came up with that on a whim and was like, “Hey, that actually works.” XD

@hybridlore @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @keilah-h

Alright everyone!! I’ll be sharing chapters of my second draft of the first book, Ember of Hope. Here’s the first one! 😄

Chapter 1

Amidala Nadir frowned. Something wasn’t quite right. She dipped her paintbrush in the pink paint and dabbed at the canvas. She smiled. Perfec…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I love thissss!!!

@keilah-h

So… I’m pretty sure Aletheia is on earth. 😂 Everything about their universe is like ours, I just don’t know the worldbuilding outside of Aletheia yet (as in other countries and cultures) because my charries never leave the country until the sequel to the trilogy. (Which is a couple years down the road XD)

@freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision

Y’all mentioned college and I’m over here like “I’ve been thinking about college since seventh grade….” 😂 I think it’s because that was when my brother started looking into it, and I was like, hey, I wonder what college I wanna go to. And the crazy thing is, I already have one that I’m really interested in.…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I’ll be praying for you! 🙏🏼❤️

Just always remember that your heavenly Father never requires perfection. That’s why Jesus died for you and for the whole world. Because we’re sinful, imperfect human beings, who are in desperate need of a Savior. He’s always there for you. His steadfast love endures forever. 💕

Keep on trustin…[Read more]

@orangearmadillo

Yw!

@hybridlore

😂👍🏼

@hybridlore

Oh, you’re totally fine. XD It’s an easy mistake to make. 😉 The way I remember it, is that you wear “sneakers” not “snuckers.” 😛

@orangearmadillo

We sneaked up to the garage…

Ok, as soon as I saw this I was like “Yesss!” Because I see people used “snuck” all the time, even in published books and it makes me cringe every time I see it. 😆 So good job. 👏🏼😂

Anyway, I like it so far and am looking forward to reading more! 😊

😂

@whalekeeper

Oh yes, hehehe

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision

Thanks everyone!! I just came back from the library, lol, so next time I go I’ll have to see if they have any of these! 😄

I don’t want to make a whole other forum for this, so I’ll ask it here. XD

Does anyone have any dystopian book recommendations?

I noticed that since I write dystopian, I should probably read in that genre. I already know about the Hunger Games but I don’t think my mom wants me reading those, so I’m looking for other suggestions. 🙂

I don’t k…[Read more]