EpicAddie2

@ariel-ashira oooohh…

@rochellaine Slowly… Trying to show more. But I may end up changing this scene.
@ariel-ashira Welcome!

@rochellaine @epicaddie2 @aislinn-mollisong @ingridrd @alia
I’m here editing, earlier than usual. 🙂

@jess-penrose No, you haven’t told me about passive voice yet. 🙂

@seekjustice That’s good to know I’m not alone. 😀

@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.

@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.

@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!

@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]

@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.

@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.

@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!

@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]

@christi-Eaton There’s a manga series, Manga Classics that adapts classics into graphic novels. I’ve only read the Jungle Book and Les Miserables adaptions. They were pretty good.
Some of Ted Dekker’s books have been adapted into graphic novels.
There’s also comic collections like, Calvin and Hobbes, Peanuts, etc.
That’s all I can think of off the…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x Glad you like your final! 🙂
Now I just have to finish everyone else.
Though I did realize I made myself a bit to big. *shrug*

Oh, good. *sighs in relief* The Wiser isn’t dead. Thank you, @catwing! Or should I thank Kay? Or even the Wiser himself, for simply acting?

Anyway, this was great! As usual. 🙂

@rochellaine

Farewell 🙁

@jess-penrose

I should probably get lunch too. Bye!

@rochellaine

Farewell 🙁

@jess-penrose

How’s your writing going?

@jess-penrose

Ah no, I don’t think she did. It was fun anyway though!

@jess-penrose 🙂

@catwing I have trouble with showing not telling as well, so much of my editing involves fixing it! You are not alone in this struggle!

@Rochellaine i don’t think we were supposed to, but Jess did and I liked my last line so I did too!

I hope your confusion lessens some time soon 🙂

@jess-penrose Yeah, I have trouble showing, not telling. 🙁
Maybe after I go through all these and get the revised doc to you. I’m revising it in a different doc. 🙂
Just wondering, did you think I needed to develop the characters more?

@rochellaine @seekjustice I have to go to bed. Good night.

@jess-penrose

My last line was:

above the din came Errol’s voice, but I could not distinguish his words from the rest of the chaos.

your last line is very interesting too 😉

@Rochellaine

Sorry, you’ll thank me one day though (or maybe not)

@jess-penrose @rochellaine

Me too! I got 375. How’d you guys go?

@jess-penrose @rochellaine

Ten minutes, sounds good!

@seekjustice Unfortunately I’m editing, so no Word War.
@jesspenrose Yes I’m curing all those zombies you pointed out. Thanks again. 🙂

@jess-penrose

Yeah, mate 😉