Emma Flournoy

@winter-rose XD This sounds really funny

I’m guessing Rook is actually an alternate version of Sam, from another dimension?

I don’t have much experience with blurbs, but I like this one. It seems slightly long, like the others are saying.

“A different bodyguard would give anything to protect a member of the Slate family.

Not Rook. Not if his…

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@Winter-Rose ooh I love it. The others have said my thoughts basically, but I would echo that yes, my first impression was that it was a little long, so if you could cut down some of it, it might be better.

I loved it too. One of my favourites alongside Rogue One. Kylo Ren has to be my favourite villain of all time. I was pleasantly surprised.

@gabbyj *hands you hot chocolate* Worry not. I know my close relatives can get out of hand sometimes. 😛

@theacornman I love your signature. XD

@mariposa This is epic. 😀 XD Love the frogs. And my fire.

The only thing I don’t like about it is that you’re making me hungry.

I love that @princessfoo!

Thank you so much, guys! Remember, any topic is welcome, so don’t feel like you have to wait on me to okay a topic! Share anything that comes to mind! @dekreel @jenwriter17 @lady-iliara

@alia Well, you’re right, a lot of it was a copy… but for some reason they played it in a way that seemed fresh to me. Although, I will say, the characters were definitely a stronger point than the plot

I think it would have been great for Rey to turn to the dark side, too 😀

That moment when Kylo says “Let’s leave everything behind. Snoke,…[Read more]

@shannon Yep, I play guitar… more like I’m learning it right now

I can’t play super fast fingering

🙂 That’s another good idea. If I have enough time, I might try to that at some point.

@aislinn-mollisong XD XD @dekreel You’re right. That does sound like an awesome first line 😀 I wouldn’t be so sure you can’t write songs @aislinn-mollisong…[Read more]

@catwing … that would make sense. And you’re right, the laws of physics and order are completely different there, in some ways

@lady-iliara 😀 Thanks! I’m glad

@christi-eaton  I just watched the Wingfeather Saga short film last night! It was cool! I liked Peet X)

I loved he part where it was sparkling everywhere when Leeli started singing, and the fang was like blown away. That was AWESOME! So well done!

Oh yeah, I agree with @waterlily about the footnotes. HILARIOUS XD

@mariposa  Wow. That’s…. awesomeist thing… yeah, @kate-flournoy, you and me both

@mariposa *chokes on her left-over Christmas gingerbread and faints into the eggnog*

Oh wow… I… I don’t even know what to say…

@gabbyj Okay. Well, in that case I’d definetly try and keep my distance if I could. Whenever possible I’d use long ranged weapons. Due to their size a ballista springs to mind. I’m going to assume your dragons breath fire so wooden weapons are redundant. A suit of metal armour might not be the best idea as it would essentially become an oven. Even…[Read more]

@Winter-Rose I love how you tied it together at the beginning and end; nice work. 😀

Overall, I think it’s pretty strong. I do think you could cut this one line: Before he can drop the mission killers close in, confronting him with a choice. Will he run from the men who want Amy dead, or will he remain and risk repeating a past defeat he wishes…[Read more]

@dekreel I joined August 2016ish. So I guess a year and a half now. Though it feels like an eternity. I’ve been writing for 3 and 1/2 years. Maybe 4… *shrug*

@winter-rose I know! I was looking through those ancient posts…time travel can exist, can’t it. XD

(not writing yet)

@dragon-snapper  Yep, that’s the one I found! For some reason I expected it to be two or three years ago, but I guess you weren’t on KP yet… How long have you been on KP?

(BTW I’m not writing. Yet…)

DRAGON SNAPPER’S CHAIR 1

@Dekreel @winter-rose Anyone else wondering. Man this was a long time ago. Back then I melted chairs too.