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EmilySF replied to the topic Y'all help me storm my brain!!!! in the forum Plotting 2 years, 6 months ago
For your YA fantasy:
I think there might be more potential for more mature themes with Jarek being 15, because he won’t be purely emotional, but can still have those sort of responses; any deeper thoughts he has and more mature, developed reactions to things will be both believable and more powerful. You won’t be held back by a more…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Sofia
The group was talking about the building in terms she didn’t understand. She couldn’t describe quite like what the building was, to herself. It was like the Kaula, but the stones were rough and not smoothed for the walls. And there seemed to be no order to the halls, and too many rooms of various…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
Hi! We have and haven’t yep! 🙂 It’s nice to meet you! I’m Clare, but you probably already knew that. 😉 That’s not weird at all, honestly. And I’m not surprised because there were only three pages, heh. I’d do the sam if there were that few. ;D
Interesting! Yeah, I wouldn’t exactly call my interest in LotR and Middle Earth obsession,…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
I didn’t see that! I’ll have to go find it. 🙂 Do you happen to know which discussion it’s on?
My “I technically count as new” topic. 🙂 2nd or 3rd page.
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 technically, I guess, but you can go if you want @koshka. I’m going to be busy for a bit with rearranging bedrooms and cleaning them and stuff, so you can just have Sofia sitting happily with the children getting her hands bandaged and listening to Zlatan and Vulkasin. I’ll hope in if I get a chance, but I don’t know how l…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 2 years, 6 months ago
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 yes, Sofia is like 6’2”-6’4”. That’s a little bit shorter than (V-brother), but quite a bit taller than Zlatan. 🙂
(oh, and both hards are scraped up, but the right one is more so)
Sofia
“I’m guessing you’ve absolutely no idea why you’re here,” fox girl grinned. “It’s becoming a trend.” She hooked her arm around Sof…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, this book will take all the mastery of writing I can muster and more. 🙂
I agree with you. I am not sure whether this will be a stand alone or a series. I think, for now, I am planning on a stand alone, and if there is a second it will also sort of be a stand alone, just less so, but still so because it will be about a…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Sofia
“You’re bleeding!” the second girl gasped, speaking softly. The shorter of the two men held her back. The boy paled and looked away. The fox girl shook her head.
“Well, we’ll have to fix that! It’s nice to meet you, Sofia!” Fox girl smiled. “These are my friends.”
Sofia glanced down at her hand, quickly withdrawing it…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Sofia
“She’s not with them…”
“So … she?” The boy shrugged.
The fox growled low and the girl held him tighter. “Oh no … not doing anything … friend or foe.”
“Well, we don’t … do we?”
“Hiya!” The girl with the fox stepped out from behind the two men; they were clearly shocked.
“Lyn!” The othe…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
@karissa-chmil OK, but WHERE did you find that upper left picture for Will?? It is amazing!!!
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EmilySF replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 2 years, 6 months ago
@e-m-trepke, what if you don’t even know the group exists in the first place…? Because I don’t plan on the manipulation being clear, and only plan on it showing up if I continue the story for quite a while after the MC’s death.
Anyway, just a thought. 🙂
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
Ooooo, yet again sounds like an amazing idea!
Thanks! 🙂
Hahaha! You don’t talk too much! I actually feel most comfortable with talkative people, I think, because my friends have mostly been that my entire life!
Well, that’s a relief. Fun! I won’t feel bad talking, then.
lol even if it’s not a thing, you could make it a thing! In the wri…
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EmilySF replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
(Annoys. My post from this morning just posted.)
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Sofia
Someone cried out, their voice echoing into the hall. Sofia picked up her steps, overjoyed to hear a voice besides her own. Even though it broke the silence, it had become a small comfort to her.
More voices spoke, the words unintelligible and fainter.
She began to step faster down the lamp lit hall,…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
^That is a ‘mood board’ I made for one of my characters, Hannish Macao, who isn’t very relevant to one of my WIPs but sort of it. He has his own story, and so I figured I’d make this for him.^
^^Those are both for the same character.^^ She is the MC of my own oldest WIP and although I don’t like the positioning of the pictures in the second…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 2 years, 6 months ago
it is, isn’t it!
That does seem to be the general trend of his options, heh. The only bump in that is: the only people who actually know that the shadow group exists are the members of the shadow group, because they are REALLY shadowy and he wasn’t even aware of the manipulation, so he thinks it was all him. It’ll likely pan out that…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 yeah, she’s… seen a dark thing or two and lost a connection or two, in her lifetime. This makes her all the more protective of what she has already, and because of how she is, she doesn’t exactly deal with her sorrow very well, usually pushing it down deep after a very specific mourning period. (Plus, she lost her bf.)
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EmilySF replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 heh, yep! I usually do it all on my computer, but yeah, cool.
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EmilySF replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 2 years, 6 months ago
@e-m-trepke Definitely! I am vague about this particular part because, (as I mentioned) I don’t know him quite well enough. He’s got a few options, tho: continue believing that it was justified, despite everything proving it wasn’t; doubt and go insane; doubt, not go insane, and repent after finally forgiving himself; doubt, go insane, recover and…[Read more]
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