Ellie Wingfeather

@kyronthearcanin Wow, blue hair?? XD Yeah, I would like to pay more attention to it so that my characters are more different, so I thought it would be fun to see what everyone on here does. Looks like you’ve done a pretty good job on it though!😅

@rae

Cool! Yeah, it’s funny how our characters kind of reflect different parts of ourselves. And…[Read more]

I’m sorry guys, but I’m going to have to leave this RP. It’s just kind of a lot to keep up with and I’m already in several other RP’s. This has been really fun and I’ll really miss RP’ing Fracture…*cries* XD I just really need to focus on my WIP.

Thanks for understanding!

@lydibug

Sorry, I’m going to have to not join after all. I need to focus more on my writing, and I’m already in quite a few RP’s. Though this is a really cool idea!!

@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Sorry guys, but I’m going to have to leave this RP to focus more on my writing. Just thought I’d let you know!

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I get it now! It’s simply the power of resistance and the fact that none of the other Paynes know that they’re being lied to. So Sef will have to confront her lies in a more obvious way than most books.

That makes sense! And yeah, definitely don’t feel like you have to take any of my advice… It’s totally up to you…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay, so this is sort of like a spiritual battle? Sef can defeat the Pythonos because she is willing to stand up to their lies. Lilitu is a Payne too, though, right? The reason Sef is the only one who can defeat them is because she has believed their lies and he hasn’t?

Essentially, yes, and…no. It’s hard to explain the thoughts i…[Read more]

@vinagirl (Thanks @rae for the tag XD I was super confused until I figured out why you had tagged me separately lol.)

Hi! I’m also a homeschooled Christian girl and oldest child! (Yay! XD) I go by Hybrid on here, and I write science fiction and sometimes dystopian.

It looks like you already got asked a ton of questions, and it’s getting late, so…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, wow XD I didn’t even realize it had been so long since this was posted. Sorry, I don’t know why I didn’t see it before, I know you didn’t tag me but I check the recent topics fairly often. I totally get that, but I think in future editing it might make more sense to cut the opening chapters. But it’s totally up to you…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s a second book I don’t think it’s a big problem.

I agree, the ending is abrupt, but I’m not sure how to make it any less so. It just kinda m…[Read more]

@jonas @whalekeeper @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @rae

@savannah_grace2009

Great job on the outline! I know it’s hard XD I’ve tried to outline my stories before, but tbh I never really got a complete outline.

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s…[Read more]

@jonas @rae @freedomwriter76

Sef

“I-I guess we could stay together,” Sef said softly. She didn’t want the others upset at her for wanting to split up, and if they thought that was better…she would do what they wanted. She was used to not having her own way. She didn’t deserve it.

She just wanted to go home. Back home where nobody cared one…[Read more]

@esther-c

Okay! That’s fine! I totally understand not having brainpower lol!

@esther-c

Lol!! Fynn XD

Livia

“That would be fun,” Liv said slowly, contemplating it. If she was going to go to the dance, she might as well learn how to, well, dance. “Where are the classes?”

Ummm….idk what character to add.

Oh wait. On second thought….

I’m adding Brigitta (Briggs) a really adorable little girl. She has green hair, skin, and eyes and can manipulate plants. She’s really sweet, is about 8 years old. (she kind of reminds me of @rae ‘s Nae in the Character Castle…wait that’s her name, right??)

She can be useful to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Livia

She gave Lukas a high five and lowered her eyes, smiling to herself.

“I think I may have gone a little overboard…” she laughed, “but the expression on his face was worth everything!”

“No kidding,” Lukas shook his head.

And then a thought crossed her mind. “Wait. I think we have a problem.”

Lukas tilted his head to the side.…[Read more]

@rae

It’s okay, Sara is the name of one of calyhuge’s charries, I only know cuz I haunted this forum before I joined. You’re good.

Oh. Oh. Ohhhhh. That makes so much more sense XD Thanks!!

@calyhuge

how dare you steal my name!!! lol jk

@lydibug

Sounds like so much fun!!! Am I understanding correctly that there is one ghost for every charrie involved?