Ellie Wingfeather

@whalekeeper

Wow. That was kind of confusing without context, but intriguing character. Why is he writing the letter if he knows he won’t go to that college?

@theducktator

Lolol. Is algebra really that bad? 🤪

@ellette-giselle Oh right. 🤦‍♀️ Sorry. I hope you have fun. Are you still away for Thanksgiving?

@ellette-giselle Girl. 😳🫠

When are you going to post the next section?

(I’ll get to the snowball later this afternoon.)

@highscribeofaetherium

Lolol.

You don’t have to post your words, but you’re welcome to if you want. 😉

@ellette-giselle 💨⚪ @esther-c 💨⚪

@rae

Wow that’s crazyyyy

It doesn’t matter to me honestly!

@rae

Um…WHAT

@esther-c

yes that would be funnn!

@godlyfantasy12 @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 (I know, I already talked to you xD)

YOU’RE BACK!!!! 🎉🤗

Praying. 🙏

@the-ducktator That’s okay! I’m glad it wasn’t terrible. Sorry you got a cold, though.

@rae @esther-c

I really miss this RP…is it still going??? And is there any way that I can bring Sef and Liv back…? 👀👀👀

@trailblazer

That is so cool!!!! That sounds amazing!!!!!

@loopylin

Thank you so much <333

Yesssss! I ate too much food lol

@jonas

Oh okay!

That’s not the reason anymore I guess 😂 I actually forgot I said that…a lot has changed lol

That makes sense though, I understand what you’re saying!

Oh, and as for why I changed the ending instead of them abandoning Lilitu…

There are a couple reasons why I did that. Maybe they’re not good reasons lol but I’m going to leave it, at least for now so I can play with it. I think it will make the story make a little bit more sense  in the future so I’m just going to leave it for now.

@hybridlore

Thank youuu!

@highscribe

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

Thank you so much!

I corrected the things you suggested and you’re right, I think it will flow a lot better! Thank you so much, you have been very helpful! <3

@jonas

I think I asked before why he insisted on this, and you said that it was to sweeten the deal for Kaden. Personally, I feel like you should show Kaden as having more hesitation if this is going to work. To me, it seems like they have already made up their minds to become Pythonos. Sure, they’re scared, but to me, it still doesn’t convey a s…

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@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Oh my goodness you guys are so good!!!!

I actually have noticed a couple of the things you’ve said before but for some reason I forgot to change them… *facepalm* I’ll go fix them now before I forget again lol!

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, another section! 😆 It looks good! I don’t have too much to say about, but I thought Jonas’s critiques were good.