Ellie Wingfeather

@freedomwriter76

Awww, that’s so sad! 😭 The parallelism is really cool though.

@rae Ooh, that’s a great fear for a villain! Very relatable

@savannah_grace2009 Ooh, this is really interesting! Haha, I noticed that about @scoutfinch180 too, it was very thorough!

@scoutfinch180

Also I forgot to mention…I don’t have all the exerpts from my WIP here on this forum. I will post them for you on here if you agree to help me. (because I didn’t want to take up a bunch of pages on here for no reason haha)

WHY IS THIS NOT WORKING?!?!

@scoutfinch180

@scoutfinch18o

Heyyy, I don’t think we’ve really met! I’m Sara (which you probably already knew haha!)

I have been stalking the topic where you’ve been critiquing RAE’s WIP…and I really like your critiquing style!

I was wondering…if you could maybe….critique mine too….?

I understand if you don’t have the time to help two people…I…[Read more]

@esther-c @acancello @grcr @vinagirl @hybridlore

Introducing….Marcurious!!!

Here’s the newest chapter I wrote in my WIP:

Marcurious deftly snatched a ripe apple from the market stall, and sauntered away, holding his head high as if without a care in the world.

He pasted a look of innocence on his face.

I didn’t steal this apple. Nope. I p…

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@esther-c

I love those characters SOOO much!!!!!! And their character arcs are amazing!

@anyone-who-needs-a-good-cry

I just wrote something very depressing and sad….so if anyone wants to read it…well…

A dull throbbing sensation at the back of her neck.

Anger burning hot in her veins.

Screams echoing around her, both her own, and the screams of innocent souls.

The smell of alcohol, of chloroform, of pain, of fear.

The smell…

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@esther-c

Ooh, it sounds so cool! Yeah, that’s a good way to get information, XD. A mystery-type thing would be cool! I don’t have too many ideas right now, but I would love to read it if you end up posting pieces later!

@acancello

How do you not eat sugar?!?! I would die haha! It’s not that I’m one of those people who love food too much (if you know what I mean XD) but I love being able to eat whatever I want and enjoying sweets from time to time.

I think it would be really cool if we could all coordinate a time to meet up somewhere (when we all can drive and…[Read more]

@acancello

Lol! Between me and my grandma we have enough food to last us all week XD

I know it’s not the best habit…but when I’m sad or depressed I eat ice cream and stuff like that…we have tons of ice cream and cookies and Grandma brought popcorn cake and khuchen (a German dessert) and I just made brownies…because we already don’t have…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

WHYYYYYYYYY? THIS IS SO SAD!

@freedomwriter76

Doesn’t he die without being redeemed?

Idk, that’s just what I heard I think…

@esther-c

Omc, that is amazing!!! Thank you so much (:

@esther-c

What’s the plot for their story like? Is it dystopian, fantasy, realistic?

@esther-c

Ooh, I love them! I know, sibling dynamics are so much fun. Please tag me if you post anything more about them!!

@rae

Oh, cool! No problem XD I just like noticing those things… I think @whalekeeper says Mum too even though she’s not British either. I’m kind of mixed European, but I think I have some German blood too!

@rae

Also, wait, are you British? If so, that’s really cool! I can’t keep up with where everyone lives on here XD.