Ellie Wingfeather

@jonas

You have a point, but I’ll say again that it depends on the character. The more I see of a character, the more I’ll get to know them, and that’s why I feel like it’s important to have developed side characters. But characters without a major role in the story, definitely.

And yeah, that’s kind of what I was thinking, too. The way that…[Read more]

@rae

Lol! I know, it happens to me too. It just means you’re improving!

Great job on the chapter! I don’t think the italics worked, but it’s not a big deal. Can’t wait to read teh next one!

Here was some brainstorming I did on one of my character ideas!

Name (full, nickname, anything relevant to the story): Isabelle Merrida Cortess. She’s named after her ancestors (maybe an Isabelle who came on the original ship to colonize the planet).
Race/description: Unruly/frizzy dark reddish-brown hair, hazel brown eyes. Sort of tall for her a…[Read more]

@jonas

So, I decided to create a doc and just put all the characters I’ve created into it and do the questionnaire for each of them in there, but one thing I realized is that this questionnaire doesn’t necessarily work for non-major characters. Side characters aren’t supposed to be super fleshed out, they’re supposed to be flat, so which questio…

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@whalekeeper

Yeah, that makes sense! That’s kind of what I already have been trying to do, but you put it in a way that makes more sense, lol.

@rae

Okay, yay!! XD

@kyronthearcanin

Okay! XD good! I’m glad it wasn’t annoying you, cause it was a lot of tags XD

Gotcha, yeah. Totally understand that.

@trailblazer

Yeah, I get that. My parents also made the decision to not kiss until their wedding day, and it’s amazing how they were able to follow through, especially in today’s society. I think Albert’s part is fine, because he is a lot like the boys in my school, how he teases Libbie and stuff like that. So I think you should leave it in…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks for the tag!! You’re really saving me there XD I hope to be more active, especially once I leave YWW. (:

No problem XD hopefully it wasn’t getting annoying, I just keep seeing things that I’m like, “Oh Ava does that!” or whatever, so yeah XD. When are you leaving YWW?

@rae

That was really good! I’m super interested to s…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I grew up a really sensitive kid though.

Yeah, same! I used to think scenes from veggietales were scary! XXXXD

@esther-c

You’re good! 🙂

@trailblazer

I thought the same thing as hybridlore, lol. Otherwise, great!

That whole thing about Albert wanting to kiss Libbie and Bert actually kissing Clara made me cringe (which is a good thing!) because how awkward would that be???? AHHHH! But it’s good! I like it!

@sarafini

OH MY GOSH I LOVE ADVENTURES IN ODYSSEY!!!!

but i probably won’t join….because I would rather just rant about Odyssey in general. So should I make a post thread where we can just “argue” about conspiracy theories, the way things “should have gone” (we’d be kind while arguing, of course, haha) or just talk about all things Odyssey?

@mineralizedwritings

It’s totally fine! Don’t feel bad! (Now I feel bad for making you feel bad! lol)

It does kind of sound like her though, so I see where you’re coming from.

Yeah, I really don’t want the romance to be the main reason for the abuse, because that just sounds “cruel” to put my characters so much for the sake of an unhealthy…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah, I think so! Just might make it a little easier to understand XD I mean, in hindsight, they were at a corn shucking thing. I should’ve known they were talking about CORN ears XXD

@power @hybridlore

Great advice!

@mineralizedwritings

Ottoline from “Character Party” isn’t the one I was asking the question for, though, it’s an entirely different character. (If you check out my WIP page on KP, you’ll see it.)