Ellie Wingfeather

@grcr

Why are yours so good??? I’m jealous, lol

@grcr

okay! I think i’ve used that a couple times for towns and rivers and such.

@grcr

Where do you come up with all these cool names?

@esther-c

If you print it out/read it out loud to someone, it helps a lot with forcing yourself to read the whole thing instead of just skimming over it because you know what happens. It also helps with finding mistakes and sentences that could go more smoothly.

(I know you probably won’t want to read your WHOLE BOOK out loud, trust me, your…[Read more]

@freedomwriter 76

I love it! I wish I was that good at making mood boards for villains… Here’s mine

@freedomwriter76

WHY ARE ALL YOUR BOARDS SO SADDD lol

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay, I’ll work on that.

Thank you! 🙂

@grcr

Let me know what you decide to write yours on!

@grcr

Thank you!

@rae

I’m not sure what you found wrong with this scene. I think it’s well written! It feels like I’m reading a published book!

@grcr

Ummm idk lol

I would look up writing prompts? I know KP has an article with writing prompts.

@rae

Yeah, don’t worry if you don’t get to all of them! I know it can be a lot, lol.

@rae

Thanks! That’s so sweet <3

And I’ll go back to EDITING on the first part like you said. You have great feedback! Wanna read the whole thing, XD I’ll post the link! https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ (if you don’t want to that’s totally fine!) Unfortunately, I don’t have any more chapters following this one, but if you want to critique the…[Read more]

@acancello

Aww, thanks girl!

@savannah_grace2009

I like that a lot better! It’s really up to you, though. Rae had some good feedback!

@trailblazer @hybridlore

Is this better?

“Last night, I had a dream…” Lilitu began. They stopped walking in a clearing. “I saw this girl…” he shook his head. “She was crying. She looked so sad, and hopeless…And it was so vivid. I could feel her pain, her suffering, and there was nothing I could do.” His voice was strained. Is he crying? Sef wonde…

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@thearcaneaxiom

BWAHAHA we know your name, now we can hack you! hehe