Ellie Wingfeather

Now that I’m going back to the beginning…

This is really hard XD

because I know you’re trying to go for the “chaos” vibes of a big family as they get ready for church and the party. You set up Hallie, Easton, and the parents pretty well, especially for the fast-paced scene, but the other siblings kind of disappear throughout the book.

Maybe…[Read more]

@esther-c

To be honest, I’m not really sure.

I might have to reread it a little more and let you know XD

@esther-c

I would just like to see it set up a little more at the very beginning chapters.

I know you’re going for chaos on the Sunday morning before church, but like I mentioned before, since Easton and Hallie’s family is a big one, I think you need to focus more on their family and the dynamics. I’d love to see Hallie’s closeness with her mom…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! you’re the best and I always love exchanging ideas with you <3

I LOVE LITTLE HALLIE

@esther-c

yeah, Cars and Phones BROKE ME

Last week my mom was at Mayo Clinic in Rochester doing more cancer treatments, which was hard since it wasn’t planned. I guess even if it was, it would be hard since she was gone for over a week and me and my siblings and my dad were all missing her a lot and attempting to keep our house from going out of…[Read more]

@theducktator

Awesome, thank you so much!!

@rae

I’m so glad it went well!!!! Happy Birthday, by the way!

@ellette-giselle

The cover looks really cool! Who designed the image? Was that you?

I wanted to add that the description on the back looked good, but the last paragraph didn’t give us much hope, if that makes sense. Most of the time in descriptions like that you’ll see something that leaves the reader guessing whether or not something is goi…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Huh, weird. I didn’t do that intentionally, but it might be because you don’t have an account anymore. 🤷

Thank you so much!!

@ellette-giselle

It looks awesome! Is that for the series covers, or an illustration, or what?

@ellette-giselle

So exciting!! 😅

@ellette-giselle

Good to have you back!

I’ll try to get to those questions later today. 😉 Sorry I haven’t yet.

@rae

Sounds like a lot of fun! I hope it works out! 🤗

@whalekeeper

Haha! Glad it went well!! 🤗

actually I don’t have your email…for some reason I thought I did XD

Kathleen was the one who helped me publish my short story on the website…so that’s the only reason I have it

i can email it to you if you want!

Oh my goodness I have Kathleen’s email too!

@whalekeeper

I’d say contact Josiah first. Or you could contact them both at the same time….

Girl you just unlocked a new fear that KP will one day become outdated and stop working *cries* and I’m so scared that we’ll all lose contact…that would be so saddd

I agree, something needs to be done…