Ellie Wingfeather

@esther-c

Okay! Just wanted to make sure you knew. 🙃

Let’s try that again. @highscribeofaetherium

@theshadow Yes, fifty words per snowball. 😉

@esther-c LOL.

@everyone (@highscribeofaetherium) I can also take snowballs now that my stock is all out . . .

@esther-c

Also, you forgot to blur out your last name. 😬 Unless you meant to leave it in there, I just know you had blurred it out before when posting the cover. But it might not let you edit anymore.

@esther-c

Yay, it’s out!! 😁

Hmm… @kyronthearcanin, @keilah-h, @jonas, and @liberty might also be interested.

@theducktator

Cool! I’ve been wanting to read that for a while!

@ellette-giselle

I just did! They look great! Nice to see the pictures of what they look like. Joseph’s was a little blurry… but… I think I saw a picture of him handcuffed against a wall… 😳

@theducktator

Sounds good. Third person makes it a lot easier to keep track.

Maybe they’ll just have less important roles. Or maybe they’ll die.

Lol… 😳

getting sidetracked by a good book, I have returned.

Ooh! What book did this happen to be? 🤪

@ellette-giselle

Good section!!!

Again, you’re summing up lots of time here, especially at the end. I would maybe like to be shown instead of told some of that, but it’s okay if you just really need to get to the next part.

Joseph felt that for once they were safe.

Then, something happened that changed everything.

Oh no… 😥

@ellette-giselle

Ahhhh, gotcha.

Sure!

@ellette-giselle

Aww!! 🥰

So, one question—why would Amelia inherit part of her uncle’s inn? Wouldn’t that usually go to her brothers?

Also, I like that we’re getting more conversations between Joseph and Amelia. However, I feel like they’re all based on future situations—mostly just “what if this happens?” Except for this one:
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@liberty

Alright!! 👍

@liberty Hey, you’ve got to write the next scene! 😆

@liberty X4 💨❄

@ellette-giselle

Looks good!

@esther-c @rae @ellette-giselle

OMCCCC

I’m so sorryyyy I totally forgot about this!

Ahhh

Ruth, you can totally RP first!!

@ellette-giselle

I don’t think I ever really did that either . . . unless it was like, a cut on my finger. I’ve never really heard of people licking their knees 😶

@ellette-giselle

Lol, the last part. 😆

I think the scene felt a little awkward just because we haven’t seen much of Amelia and what she feels about Joseph, but I think you’re working on adding in more of that. Otherwise, good job.

@freed_and_redeemed I love that scene!!

@whalekeeper @loopylin I mean sure, you can team up, as long as it doesn’t get out of hand. *hides behind a tree*