Ellie Wingfeather

@ellette-giselle

No, they haven’t traveled far enough for that to be a thing yet. So far they are all heading in the same direction together. That’s how I ended the last book. I can add some reminders though.

Ok, sounds good!

They actually left before that happened. (I said that in the last book) so they had no idea what even happened in the Cap…

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@ellette-giselle

I like it where it is as it is sort of the first rush of the downhill slide we’re about to hit.

Oh no.

@ellette-giselle

🤦🏼‍♀️

It’s the gang, y’all. The same gang from last book. The same gang we left at the end of the last book and are now picking up and the beginning of the next.

Do I really gotta remind the reader?

In the previous books in the series, the POV characters switched every time. Especially with the way that you left off the last boo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I like it.

It was a little unclear that the other three men were joining Leon and Julian until now, unless they were in the first scene and I’m completely blaming. I just don’t think we got to hear that they were back yet.

My guess is that since no one has seen the prince’s face, they will replace him with his c…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Next two chapters!

@theshadow

No worries! That makes sense.

@the_lost-journal @anyone-else

What are your thoughts on Jesus having siblings?

The Bible says that He does, and I am going to believe it.

If you could visit one of the holy sights from around the world, where would you go? And why?

I’m not sure! I think it would be really cool, but honestly I’m content to just read about them. I’m not big on…[Read more]

@theduckator

oops

I totally disappeared again lol

sorry hahaha

Omc that’s awesome! but sad because you won’t get as much free time :/

Making money is AWESOME lolll

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good!

Oh, gotcha, thanks.

@ellette-giselle

I have hope that you won’t kill off all the characters… but am expecting at least one of the MCs to die. 😭😫

@ellette-giselle

Great first section! You did a good job of establishing the stakes and the characters’ situations. One thought I had (for you to consider) is possibly to remove the first journal entry and start off the book with Leon. It might be a stronger beginning… but it works great with the journal entry there too.

Remind me again, who is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh, haha. XD. Yeah, I think we talked about it briefly right when you were first starting it.

Leon and Julian, from the last book. (Plus Albee and Ian, but I don’t think they’re coming back . . . unless they do. That would be cool.) I have a lot of other favorites, but they’re not in the Empire, so I doubt they’ll have much of a…[Read more]

@theshadow

The main character is incredibly bland, but also the most unique person in the universe. Typically I’ve noticed female protagonists are like this, and they’re usually super insecure about their looks but are actually pretty. Additionally, the protagonist has some special ability that makes them stand out and is caught up in a love tri…

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@ellette-giselle

6)Prepare for major fallout to begin from the Prince dying in the last book.
*nods happily*

2)Nearly everyone we love will get hurt.
why would you ever think that?! 😢

🤣

Mostly this.

@ellette-giselle

Oh, cool! You told me a vague idea of what the story was about . . . and I’ve read a scene or two that you posted on here. It got eaten by your zombie computer, right? I guess you were able to finish it?

Oh, just reading other people’s guesses and your responses to them. Plus your trigger warning at the beginning (I already knew…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I can see how that would be hard. XD The sequel to the Crimson Rose?

Oh boy. It looks like we’re in for . . . something. I’m starting to be concerned for your characters.

@ellette-giselle

It’s ok. I’m mostly teasing you. 😉

Swimming in gravel?

What book is this?

@ellette-giselle

I didn’t even do anything to you! We’re all innocent! 😂

@ellette-giselle

Of course you would.

Two can play at this game. Maybe I’ll delay the next few chapters of TCoH. 😝

@ellette-giselle

Lol.

I’m still not saying if it will even happen.

Yeah, yeah. XD Can’t be giving away spoilers before the book even starts.