Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

Well, I’m back from vacation and I have finished your book!

Sorry for the lack of comments. Often, while I was reading it, I didn’t even have Wi-fi or Data, so most of my feedback will be my answers to your questions I found on page 15 of this forum.

Overall, it was an exciting story with interesting characters. I can see why…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh joy! Oh exultation!

I haven’t been able to really look at this thread in a bit. (Been up to my elbows in royal icing.) Now oh!

I’m so excited. It’s this book! Hooray!

I love Cassion and Rory’s boards. They’re perfect.

Do you have a scene with sliding around on sock feet? It would be delightfully light-hearted for a book w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Exciting! I’ll have to go back and look at the moodboards in a minute, but the link’s not working.

@ellette-giselle ohhhh ok!

cool emblem too!

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YAYY!!!!

@ellette-giselle

AHH!

I love those boards! *gasp* Oh my gosh…it’s little-traumatized RORY!!!! Wait…is Leo going to show up?

Woah…Cassian…I already really like this guy.

So wait, are any of the characters from Sector 5 going to be in here?

That symbol is stunning! Great art, Ellette!

@ellette-giselle I don’t know, but they look pretty similar, so….

@ellette-giselle oooh new main characters!!!

Are they related? or no?

Looks like they’re defectors from the army!

@ellette-giselle

Hey! Are you still planning to put the second book out soon?

@ellette-giselle

You don’t have to be the youngest to have YSS. 😉

@ellette-giselle Yeah that makes sense with your photographic memory.

My memory sucks. Wanna trade?

@ellette-giselle

They look great!! Jason’s is so funny. I like the “better idiots” quote and the one about hiding the parts. 😂😂

@ellette-giselle

I don’t remember these fellows well because I skimmed over their part so much…but from just looking at their moodboards, I instantly liked Brian! I love his quotes. And maybe because he sort of looks like an AOA actor? Jason is funny as well…

And…Evan is showing some clear signs of YSS.

@ellette-giselle Ron, yeah, but I like Jason a lot too!

@ellette-giselle so many funny quotes lollllll

Jason’s one repeatedly misspelling “engineer” made me laugh

@ellette-giselle lol idk why I did that

@ellette-giselle yes, do it

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You’re welcome!

@ellette-giselle

Alrighty!

Also, I took the liberty of converting all your chapter titles into Headings. Now, navigating the book is super easy, barely an inconvenience!