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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I know! My family has been reading and studying about Bonhoeffer recently, and it’s amazing to think that this happened recently. I mean, people are still alive that lived through WW2!! And we’ve already forgotten SO much of it…talk about not taking heed to past failures…but the Bible says those things happen: forgetting the…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
That is the saddest and most enraging thing I’ve read in a while. I was boiling with Werner back there!
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*hysterical sobbing*
Why would you write something so enraging and tragic???!!!!!!!
*sniffles*
I feel so bad for Werner.
I am SO shocked…did things like this really happen? It seems like it would…I don’t blame you for writing this…in fact America today needs to learn about these…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
READ!!!!
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh no! You didn’t kill one of Werner’s patients..did you?? Like the little boy he was talking to??? Liam?!!!
Do you really want to know if he dies?
Yes! I want to know!
*Poofs 3 snowballs your way*
Ah! I guess I have to write the last part, now.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
AHHH! I just knew that was going to happen! Wolf didn’t die…did he??!!!
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
( @ellette-giselle Baron snippet from his POV)
I am a monster. I have taken so many lives, caused so much pain. And why? Why did I do it all? To please Father. To feel like I belonged, and had purpose, that I was worth something. My true parents abandoned me, Father took me in, I had to prove to him that his descision to take me in was…
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
You have been warned.
Duly noted.
I’ll get to Werner later in the day…I have some projects to work on now.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Wie kannst du es wagen!! Du wirst es bereuen!
Oh, I dare all right! And I don’t regret it!!!
Oh dear… I think I know who I am! *starts laughing*
Yup! You are right!
Devastating Werner flashback. Want to read some?
YES YES!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
How long do you want before I start posting the next book?
A month should be fine. But if you want to start posting earlier, that is also fine; I will catch up when I am ready.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Okay👍
(Also, apparently I am not allowed to just post a thumbs-up emoji with your tag, because I have already done that. Weird)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Just wondering. Do you have a cover for this book yet?
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
And now…I will proceed to hit four people…
@ellette-giselle @power @rae @esther-c
Write or die!!!!
@ellette-giselle Sorry…please check the post above…sometimes when I post names it still doesn’t tag them.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore Here is the next installment of Dale’s story…
…and everyone else who shows up in this part in some little way…@ellette-giselle @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @hybridlore @raxforge @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c @power @loopylin @rae @the_lost-journal
I’m serious. Everyone shows up in this story at least once. *grin* read…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Finally getting to this!
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
I think they all were pretty good.
~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
Uhhh…..If there were any, I don’t remember. (I have…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@linus-smallprint @rae @loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @hybridlore and whoever
I have a new project I’m excited to work on this week. Just spent an hour plotting the first half of it, but I’m still ironing out the wrinkles before drafting it. Some of that has to do with genre.
I think it’s going to have a lot of contemporary elements.…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
There are definitely some people even in Christian circles who use dating unwisely. I remember this one gal in my homeschool group who had an obsession with Twilight at 14. Yuckyyy, and unrealistic.
My parents allow me to date for several reasons. They believe it is wise to develop an intuition with guys before choosing one guy…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Finished it!
I’ll get to answering your feedback questions later. I may take a month to reread the story again first. (*Goes and steals all sections of the book so I can read them offline*).
But for now, here is some initial feedback on the last bit:
I think the climax and the build-up to it were well done. As cliche as rescue…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Okay cool! I’m glad that works well for you and your church community. I bet it also works well for you because you’ve known the people in your church for a long time, so there’s a lot of familiarity. A sense of home.
Your picture of dating definitely isn’t the same as what we actually do in other Christian circles, though.…[Read more]
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