Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle oh no I never said I liked what was in there. I just mean that like if it had been an ordinary horror or fantasy story, not a romance, it probably still wouldn’t have been good for Christians to read (cause of all the paranormal creatures and stuff, blah), but at least it wouldn’t be smut and probably wouldn’t have driven half a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome! I’m liking the Marvel drawings. The others are great too, but y’know, I’m not as familiar with them cause they’re your original characters.

@ellette-giselle lolll the green ember one!!

oh and yes….I think “oh, there certainly aren’t THAT kind of people in the world”  and then I take one look at the internet and am like “yep, there are, and they’re worse than I imagined”

I’m glad there are nice sites like here.

@ellette-giselle ooof

worse than Twilight????

Somehow I thought that was nearly impossible to do without sacrificing all that makes a story. I mean like twilight has all that stuff, but a few of the story concepts are almost salvageable if they were in a completely different, better written story.

@ellette-giselle wow!!! Those are some great drawings!!

@ellette-giselle

You have an older brother!! I’m so envious! I always wanted an older brother.

Yeah. We’re pretty close. Sometimes people even think we’re twins (or boyfriend and girlfriend as has happened before. That was very awkward) He’s a year and a half older than me. I also have two little brothers.

@ellette-giselle

and what’s worse is when they attack the chicken coop after eggs and chicks, the protective hens are killed, but not eaten so it’s an icky sight.

My big brother was with me (Caleb. I used to call him by Cgecko on here but since Andrew knows him I didn’t want to have to explain) and he read your story about your brother’s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yes! XD

@ellette-giselle

Ah yes. The Fowlers. A. D. Smith could write a whole joke book for them.

@ellette-giselle

All right, Ellette, here you go. Getting close to 3,000 words of feedback for you here. Please let me know if anything doesn’t make sense or if the link is not working for you. I haven’t proofread this too carefully, so there may be some questionable grammar mistakes.

Let there be Light Feedback

@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint

(if you were reading something like Fifty Shades of Grey or Twilight we would be having a totally different conversation)

OOOF NOOOOO NOT TWILIGHT

There was one good thing about it, and that was the fact that even my trashiest works look like masterpieces next to it. And they’re at least pretty much…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Eeeeeeepers. Yeah no. I’m with Helmer on hights; they’re tolerable, but I’ll die with my feet on the ground, thank you very much.

XD

@ellette-giselle

True, true. I think I can claim my paralysis gloves though (although that was inspired by some medical stuff).

(No? But I was cringing inside and wide-eyed)

@ellette-giselle

Nope. I’ve already typed up 1,367 words for you. I’ve been slowly chipping away at this when I’ve had the chance.

@ellette-giselle

I’m getting there. I finished rereading your story and will hopefully have my answers for you very soon. In fact, I don’t have any pressing School assignments at the moment and have written a lot for my own story this week, so I will be working on that right away.

@ellette-giselle

I think murderer could work as long as he said Like murderer, or almost was a murderer. If you want him to say something that he is, he could think of himself as a monster or wild beast. Or, since he is trying to be the hero, an interesting flip would be to have him decide, “I’m not the hero, I’m the villain.” That would flow wi…

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@ellette-giselle

Oh my. No, I’ve never seen that.

I stole the idea from my brother, who has also never seen that.

@ellette-giselle

XD

The one about reading as a reader and then reading as a writer is so relatable!

You can ask @raxforge , but I have a habit of criticizing every book I read for school from a writer’s perspective. My tutor is still trying to convince me that Robinson Crusoe isn’t really as bad as I said. Good luck convincing a part German to…[Read more]

@keilah-h

also, I’m not sure if you’re referring to Alan or Rour, but I think neither of them went too far. They both are wrong about something and think they’re right, and as such it’s messing with their minds.

I was referring to Alan attempting to kill Rour.

@ellette-giselle

WHAT! He didn’t go save Martha!!!!

Alan! Grrrrrr!

Alan’s beginning…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I have discovered a new favorite word!

superfluous!!!!!

I MUST tell everyone!
@beth-torres @loopylin @raxforge @theducktator @theshadow and anyone else!!!!