Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle I’m assuming that means all children are artificially incepted and grown either through surrogates or laboratories, or that two people are only allowed to get together through the leaders’ consent and split up afterward, and they keep tabs on the female. Because simply outlawing marriage and letting people run around having…[Read more]

@grcr oooh a comic, even a short one, would be so cool!

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper lollllll

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Don’t scare me like that!

@ellette-giselle yeah that seems like a crazy search history

why would you need to hide a……

what.

WHY

WHYYY

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Access granted to Elethwyn R. (That is you, right?)

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @theducktator (your late, but fine, I will let you join. Last one.)

 Here is the link to what I have done on my outline so far. I’ve just written down everything I am confident with at the beginning. I will add my ideas for the middle part and what I know of the ending later (Maybe tomorrow. I should have time…[Read more]

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Does this mean we won’t get a new section today? 🥺

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I am really enjoying the world building. Keep it up!

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Oops, sorry. I was waiting for class to start and in a hurry, so I wasn’t thinking through my writing.

What I meant was, do your characters need to make the right choice? Or should they mess up a couple times, possibly showing that God can work through even our mistakes, and working on character flaws. Although, you did already…[Read more]

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If we are going to compare a Narnia character to Eric, I think Eustace is a better fit. He and Eric are both kind of wimpy. And Eustace becomes a dragon.

Though I understand why you would grab Edmund, since Edmund betrays his family.

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They’re names are German! This is where you start to feel some of the German cross– beyond the complection. (Leon and Julian are also German names. Julian being the German version of Julius, which is very Roman. Little glimpse into the world of naming which is an obsession of mine.)

Ah. That’s a good idea.

Thank you for the pro…[Read more]

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I can see the dilemma. I think it is good that Leon and Julian are trying a more subtle approach. I think @hybridlore‘s suggestion is good. They wouldn’t have to lie then.

But they are going to have to come out with the truth eventually.

Leon and Julian might not necessarily take the correct option first as well. It might be…[Read more]

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Hmm.

Could you use this to portray a character flaw? Idk exactly what you have in mine for flaws though.

Hmmmmm…

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In this chapter, you did a better job of showing Leon and Julian are in a place they used to call home. And I’m not just referring to their comments upon seeing the village in the valley. Their interactions with the Klein family, falling right into the traditions, showed this even better than their words.

I like the feel of the…[Read more]

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I think it’s fine. They have to, in this instance, instead of just jumping at it when they don’t need to. Since Elishavet was the one who pointed that out, I would wait to see what she thinks, but I think that it’s fine.

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Yes?

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What section? Kingdom Pen, why didn’t you tell me about this? *Goes back to read*

@rae @ellette-giselle

@ellette-giselle

Okaaaaay, after I give them some decent shading. But only then. *Glares at your blackmail and poofs away*

@ellette-giselle

It’s very funny…. but as I work through my WWII set, I’ve just had an amazing idea for a fantasy. I wonder it WWII triggers fantasy ideas…….. lolololol.

*Meanwhile I sit here with a WWII era inspired fantasy, watching you talk* 😁