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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Yes, I have seen Frozen, and I think I know what you are getting at. Elsa, like Alan, worries about her powers and hurting others with them but needs to learn not to push others away. If you go back to when you were asking us which characters are like our own, Whaley, you will notice Elsa was one of the characters…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I had a feeling I needed to hear this. Thank you for the advice, I really do need to listen to it. I’m a bit of a perfectionist so it’s going to be hard to post stuff as it is, but thank you again.
Linus is 💯 correct. Plus, the more you pause the more you lose your flow. For me, I turn off autocorrect and gra…
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009
Hey ladies! I’m planning to do a few writing sprints this afternoon and was wondering if y’all wanted to join me. (For anyone else reading this, I only tagged those three because I know they’re familiar with sprinting, but if you want to join, go right ahead!!)
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
My brother loses his steam over many inconsequential details.
Me: 🎵 It’s funny how some distance makes everything seem smaaaaaalll 🎵
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
have you ever seen Frozen?
✨ Let it gooOooOoOOoooOo ✨ *Throws back my hair dramatically* I sing that song whenever my siblings are unnecessarily argumentative.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Awesome, good to know. I think I do mention very vaguely later that they won the game, but you’re right, I don’t think any reader will make the connection.
So, that was my bad 😅 You’ve read all the chapters I’ve posted. For some reason, my brain didn’t make the connection that you had read them all because I read this:
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
IS THAT ALAN ABD MARTHA!!?!? *excited dance*
Maybe…
I was hoping to have that finished by Valentine’s day, but have fallen behind a bit. Hopefully, by next week it will be done.
Love how you always have illustrations on hand, by the way. XD
Thank you! I like illustrations. This story started out as illustrations…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
I doubt I’m any help right now.
No worries. I usually write without outlining as well. I’m just trying to speed up my writing and thought I would give outlining a try to see if it would help me out.
My “outlining” consists of writing random notes all over the margins of my paper as I write and forgetting about them.…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
And I think I’ll do another for R&L. However, I can’t figure out how to do the accent mark on this computer, so his name will have to be plain. Poor fellow.
@koshka @ellette-giselle casually stalking your charries…
Reuven (the bus)
His mustang would be out of the shop that evening. Reuven sighed and clipped his duffle closed. Having work in…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yay!!
I found a round about way to get access!! (Don’t ask)
Should I be concerned? lol 🤪
Everette (I think) asks if Sara knows who Jesus was. Now, unless you have a very different theology than I do, I believe it’s who Jesus “is” not “was”.
Good point—I’ll have to change that.
Also, unless I missed something, the last we had wit…
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Thanks, lollll
(I just realized I try to match the other person’s tone, that person being you)
oh my word!! It’s so accurate tho!! That is a total Leo expression! And Rory is… yeah, being Rory. 😂
😁 Hehehe, I’m glad it has the right feeling, even if it’s cartoony. I felt like it was right to add Leo because he’s pla…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I didn’t draw your characters very accurately. (They are both supposed to be older, Leo probably doesn’t have goggles.) But I remember reading a section of the roleplay and having a specific image in my head, so I drew it, and here it is. Rory stands, Leo is on the stool.

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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @theducktator @ellette-giselle
Just an update for you all so you know I’m still working on this.
I’m currently trying to explore further for my outline and have switched to paper. Right now I’m trying to get everything I know about the story onto paper. I’ve started and stopped this a few times now, but feel I have fallen into a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
that’s cute. I got a way better match. I married Eomere when I was 13. I was Faramir’s secret sister that nobody really knew about. He was the only one in the family who loved me. Boromere didnt have time for me and Denathor was just a messed up dad. But yeah, anyways. That’s who I really am.
Self inserts are so fun thoug…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle all righty then!
I went through a space phase at that age too! It lasted several years, and I still think space is cool, but I’ve been studying a lot of science for school, and I’ve decided I can’t stand physics and chemistry. So, no astronomy career for me. XD
yesss same. I like physics but not chemistry. Well,…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh ho ho, well…
The thing is, I can’t remember everything that’s in Castle in the Sky, but the rest of the Studio Ghibli films have a lot of Japanese mythological spirits. Beings like No-Face, Totoro, or Mononoke are all considered spiritual powers. I personally do not mind these kinds of characters in literature, as they…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh, Studio Ghibli is amazing. I have a bunch of the movies on my shelf right now. Which have you watched?
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whaley replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Give yourself a foundation to build off of, otherwise you’re just building castles in the sky, and only Miyazaki can do that. 😉
Hehehe, I see what you did there
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character commissions!! in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Ok, thanks. I’ll try and finish it up this evening, otherwise I should have some time on Wednesday. I have a bit less free time than I anticipated.
I’m pretty busy atm and I also got some new art supplies I wanted to use on some drawings for myself, but you guys can give me descriptions. I can’t promise…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
If you’re worried about that, you’ll be 100% fine.
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@esther-c
I’d love to but I’m out of town and don’t have access to my computer right now! 😭
Aw man, no worries though!! <33
Oops, forgot to break at :00! Stopping now
Going again!
I… didn’t really follow my schedule, lol. But it’s okay!!! Because I got a lot done. Clocking out for the afternoon. 😎✌️
Hey! Sorry I missed that. I’d love to another time, but I’m also out of town and don’t have my laptop, plus I’m with family so I can’t really sneak away right now.I’m glad it went well! <3
No worries! I totally understand! <3
Ooh, sprints! If you do any more of these, I’d love to be tagged. 🙂
Oh my word… 🤦🏻♀️ You just reminded me that like over half of us on here know what sprints are because of CWW. My badddd 😂
🤣🤣🤣I think there’s even a topic for it somewhere. XD
Yeah I think you’re right 🤣 We’ll have to dig that up and revive it!!!
Indeed. XD