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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Roland looked up. “I’m going with you.”
Called it.
“Well, Roland, what’s next on our path to the Capital?”
So they are heading to the capital then. Did I just miss this earlier? I really need to stop missing things.
“None that has lived to tell the tale,” Roland replied. “Though one boy was found drowned in the river a few days…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I love it!!! Julian is amazing. The debating scene was a nice change from how they’ve had to speak to others in the past.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Weird. Are you on the home page where it shows you all the topics?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
So, the website isn’t loading for me. But I know they send out a video with help to figure out how to navigate stuff. I know it’s super overwhelming the first day, but you’ll figure it out in no time.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @esther-c @liberty
I guess the Chickadee tent was filled all the way, or they’re not doing it this year? I’m in Sunrise Peak
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Lol.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yes! I did. I haven’t gotten to it yet…I’m working through some things at home right now…but I may be able to read it within the next few days.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
*chuckling*
YES!!!! I’m planning to join the Brookside Stories. I loved the title. Do you want to join that one? What name are you going under? I’m using Liberty D.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore FINALLY!!!!!!! The next and last part of -Snowballs- is here! Thanks for reminding this procrastinating person.
Anyway…I am planning to write a sequel…just because Dale has had such a hard time! (I feel so bad for him…poor boy) So, I’m hoping to write another story where he’s recovered from his trauma and is having a good t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Anti protection squad
This got me laughing out loud pretty hard XD
And, I’m sorry, but after meeting you in person, you’re too sweet to be a psychopath <3
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Poor Highscribe. What did you do to her?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Leon is definitely more confident and the leader. It feels like Julian looks to him and gets more concerned about things. And Julian likes to make quips. That was just what I think I noticed from this chapter.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
He’s my favorite so I want him to die.
No wonder you kill off so many characters. 😅
🖋️Official KP Psychopath✒️
Lolol
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Good section!
Roland, I in no way want to go against God’s will, but are you sure?” Leon asked.
Roland nodded.
When I read this, I thought that maybe Leon and Julian should have prayed about it before letting him come with them.
Roland shook his head in disgust. “I have a mind to smash it,” he muttered.
“Whoa, whoa, whoa,” Le…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
That’s not his only chapter, just the next one when he appears… I think.
He also needs to die.
That sounds contradictory, lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Thanks!! I’m glad it’s working, I honestly don’t even know what I did lol. Warrain is based a lot on Overwatch, which I’ve played a lot before, so maybe it’s coming from experience and that’s how. (It’s still a very different game though.)
I sure like Cole.
When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy whimper*
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
That makes sense. I bet you’re really good at writing villains lol
Despite acting like he has a death wish, though, Dante doesn’t actually want to make Alpha any more angry than he is now. He doesn’t hate Alpha at all or want to hurt him. He took the knife because he was scared, and would have tried to defend himself if Alpha…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
If Nar is his sister, he’s going to be furious that his new enemy is carrying around pictures of his sister. If Nar is a crush then he’s going to be really mad because it doesn’t seem like he would want everyone in kingdom come to know that he carries around her picture.
Nar is his sister, and he is very protective of her.…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Hmm, well I did this for a few reasons. One, we’ve heard this all before in Ardenta and I want these books to have a little bit of a different feel than those, ya know.
Ah.
This is also supposed to be a very fast paced book, because I do want you to feel some of the rush and speed that the characters themselves go through. At t…
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