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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I got one across the arm on accident and that thing scared for almost a year!
Woah…um…do I want to ask this?…yes…I will…
So, uh, who whipped you?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
*gasp of horror*
Well at least it’s spelled differently and your father is not Arab. (right?)
Right! He’s not Arab…but half Turkish.
Goodness! The amount of names of family members I’ve used? *faints*
My goodness. Poor you!
Hey! You are looking at the wrong person! I didn’t hit Rolf with a horsewhip!
I know, I know…
I mean,…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Nearby, he saw Rolf lying on his side, his shoulders jerking with silent, tearless sobs. Leon couldn’t blame him.
😭😭😭
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay. I’ll mention the ink just for you.
Aw. Thanks!🥰
you might not see one of them ever again.
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NONONONONONO!! Okay, if you have to kill one of them…pick Roland…please…I already like Rolf way too much since he got whipped in the face…and I now know a character who understands what that feels like…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Hassan struck him across the face with his horse whip. Rolf bent, gasping from the pain, his hand pressed to his face.
OH MY GOSH!!!!! OW. OW. OW!!!
I know that’s like!! Except a cow delivered the lash to my face…
I can totally feel what Rolf’s feeling right then!!! *sob* SO cruel, Ellette!!!! Do you have any idea how much p…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
“There is only one god you need to worry about, and that is me: Hassan Salim.
You’ve got to be joking. Hassan is my father’s name…only it’s written with one “s”: Hasan.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I seem to recall it was you who invited me here. 🧐 XD
Poor fake Alec. At least fake Leon and Rolf get their freedom. 🤣
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Nooo….. they are brought in by the traders. People of the Empire are NEVER sold as slaves
Maybe saying something about that, then? I wasn’t sure if the people were a different people group. I would think they look different than Aryan..because that’s what the People of the Empire are.
Does it need to?
I think it may be good to m…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Alec is halfway across the world, Ellette.
Actually they’re not even on the same planet, right?You can’t seriously believe that you’re holding him against the wall right now. That’s just some poor civilian, or maybe one of the bad guys, (in which case you can keep him there.)Just put the gun down, and no one’s going to get hur…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
This calls for a new squad! Not the protection squad, because if I did that you would try to steal my characters.
The CHARACTER WITNESS PROTECTION!!!
*promptly rescues Leon and Rolf, gives them new identities so they can hide from you and they disappear into the city*
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yikes. This is not looking good.
So Hassan paid the soldiers to look the other way?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
do you guys remember this RP *cries*
I read through a good chunk of it and I was laughing so hard!!!
Our RP’s always ended in utter chaos lolllDoes anyone remember Compound Fracture 🤣😂😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Also go to this page
@esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Julian rifled about in his pack for their cooking pot and handed it to Aelic. “Go and get some then, but for goodness’ sake don’t you fall and sprain your ankle.”
Aelic’s probably used to running around the forests…I could just see him bare-footed, dashing among the trees with his hair flying about!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Roland smiled and nodded.
Rolf leaned forward in excitement. “What did you say?”
Roland flushed again. “Well, a few things. The important thing is, I asked her to wait for me.”
Rolf’s eyes widened slightly. “And?”
“And she said she would.”
I feel like at least one of the other characters should be saying something here. I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Wow. That escalated quickly!
Seems like things are about to get rough for Leon and Rolf… 🥺
Why wouldn’t the slave trader just kill them instead of tying them up and everything?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Uh oh, it doesn’t look like it’s working again. But yay, thanks! I’ll check it out!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle ikr??
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