Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

Yeah… 😝 Oopsy. Not to mention, the end of Chapter 13 kind of makes it seem like he’s unsure about what he does. Which maybe he is. I have to solidify his arc soon xD.

Hey, that is the best way to write. Keep at it!

I’ll try! 🫡

@ellette-giselle @whaley @keilah-h @theducktator @stephie

Finished a drawing of Alan and Martha! I meant to post this yesterday, but couldn’t log into Kingdom Pen for some reason. But now here it is!

@ellette-giselle

KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!

Yup. I couldn’t get into my account for a while, so I emailed you feedback on the latest two sections. I don’t know if you saw that. But I’m back now! Maybe I should code up a new website…

Tagging some people to make them aware of this area on KP!

@mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @rae @godlyfantasy12 @theshadow @princesachronicle22

Y’all are also free to answer last week’s question if you like.

@ellette-giselle thank you!!! I’m really proud of it. I’m planning to keep digitally redrawing the sketches I did for that story (it’s one of my favorites thanks to all the creatures I got to design for it lol)

@ellette-giselle

Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.

true, but even if you change it to another female name they might still be after you.

Ehh, just

Any thoughts on this whole “White Knight” business?

hmm? I must’ve missed that chapter (happens sometimes), how far back is it so I can read through it?

@ellette-giselle

the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name)

I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.

Pleading medical or religious exemption (if the country has…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Well, I’m glad it comes through! I don’t even know what I’m doing… I just pray and try to picture it.

Okay, good. I was trying to put foreshadowing and hints in the chapters before so that it’d all make sense, but since the story was still forming at some stages (Chapter 4, I think, the one where Alec comes home for dinner, n…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aw, Ellette, I don’t even really know what to say. I’m so, so glad you like it! Thank you for all the encouragement!

I want this made into a MOVIE!!

Every author’s not-so-secret dream xD

Yeah, poor Everett. It’d be a challenge for sure.

So… was it obvious before this chapter what Alec did for his job? Do you feel like you have…[Read more]

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Thank you everyone for your comments on the doc!!

The reason I haven’t added anything new is because I moved it all to Reedsy. Reedsy will professionally typeset it all, and have a more professional look to it, and I like Reedsy better for writing.

The point of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

KP is breaking on my phone. I got emailed for that but when I clicked on it, it did not show your post. Now I’m on my laptop, and somehow it shows it now. 🤔

“What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*

Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly kill…[Read more]

@theshadow

It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD

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Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m shaking my head at you right now.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.

You 100% are!!

Nice. 😎

I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.

Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.

You have no ide…

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@ellette-giselle

I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.

since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,

I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.

Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.

When did Leon start calli…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Probably not, I guess I just missed that.

@ellette-giselle

ack, yes, I missed a word there. When I read it over my brain said it was there. XD

XD Yep, happens to me too.

Okay, so Julian was about 17-19 in Joseph’s book (I never specified) which makes him in his late twenties now. Leon is a few years older so late twenties to very early thirties.
Rolf and Roland are around 19-25
Aelic is 1…

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@ellette-giselle

Sorry, for some reason I didn’t get an email for this. 🙁

Good section! I like Julian’s reaction to Leon being the White Knight, and how they resolve their argument.

Julian raised an eyebrow. “I think that’s about the first time you have ever admitted I was better at you than something.”

Lol.

He knew this room very well. Leon…

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@ellette-giselle AHAHAHAHAHA
*more wheezing laughter*
lolllll that’s hilarious.

@ellette-giselle that hilarious XDXDXD