@ellette-giselle
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle ahhh ok. I can understand a character messing around with your thoughts. Happens to me all the time lol
and I can agree with the “solid reason to die” thing.
oh and Aaron and Sabina’s scene at the end was really sweet!
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks ago
thx
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
I know!!! And it doesn’t make any sense why not, unless they just wanted to emphasize a smaller circle of awesome characters.
And if they wanted a sweet, visible romance, Faramir and Eowyn are so incredibly perfect. We just listened to that part last night and I was half laughing half crying. But maybe it’s a mercy because they…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle ok this is kinda random but Rory’s thoughts made me think of something: in one of my sci-fi WIPs I have creatures called Changelings, who are basically humans but have the ability to change color and disappear from sight. The way Rory describes himself as wanting to disappear reminds me of my Changeling character Jaylen talking…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint bruh I guess not
on-slot
It’s actually spelled “onslaught.”
Also this new thing with Noah is very interesting! While I wouldn’t mind him dying if it furthered the plot, I honestly don’t think you should just kill him off for shock factor and “no one will ever know what happened because he’s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Oh, funsies!
This is a great idea! XD Unfortunately, your characters are actually pretty unique, so finding a match here will take a bit.
Faramir and Beregond! My sister and I have been re-read/listening to the trilogy again and I had forgotten how much I liked Beregond. Ever noticed the illustration of…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Happy you found that encouraging! Sorry if at times you have found what I said discouraging, I know I do tend to notice the negative more than the positive, and sometimes I just don’t know what to say. But I’m glad you have continued to write and have not given up!
As to if I think Noah is dead, I had the feeling he would…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 1 day ago
In this chapter, I felt more drawn into your story than I had before. Remember a while back when we were asking you to show us what life was like running an orphanage, wanting to get to know the kids more? You’ve done it here.
I felt the fun of playing with the children, I felt the worry for Noah and the foreboding of dread. Not…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Leo
Leo was about to lead the way down the hall, when, with a flurry of wings Hunter appeared beside them.
Which nearly got the kid slammed by Rory, who waved instead. Strange, but then this place tended to put himself on edge, so…
For a moment the boy was lost somewhere else. Seeing something else. Then…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Okay. That’s not the hat I had in mind. What I was thinking of is probably too modern for your book. I was picturing more of the hat that Kalmar wears in Wingfeather Season 1, because that was what came up when I searched ‘traditional working class cap’.
(Also, just so you know, I noticed that a lot of people tagged me…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Okay. I guess that would also help bring not just the characters, but the world to life.
I guess I do have Alan scratching his elbow whenever he feels the guilt of having used magic. I’ll have to think of some for other characters. I feel Tyn and Eric would have some.
I should probably pay more…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh my. Those are stupendous. XD
I just knew he was doomed…Sorry y’all. II had homework ambush me. I’ll try to write an RP now.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@rae @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @anyone-else
I’m thinking about making something (mostly for fun) that compares characters from Freedom’s Fire to characters in other media (mostly movies tbh) and i was wondering what characters from, like, Marvel and LOTR y’all would compare each character to👀
(With a focus on…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Thank you!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle oof
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
XD oh my goodness Rory is adorable lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle cool! I’m assuming he’ll be an important character later on in the plot then?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Lol XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle wowwwwww
that’s super cool!
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