Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

So now you stole a gun from me?

Well, it’s my world, so it’s my gun. And since I’m its author, I say it’s out of bullets. 😝

*makes another attempt to steal Leon and Rolf from you*

Okay. I feel like that wasn’t really clear . . . but then again, we did get a warning that the next town would be dark, so I guess that was it. I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle makes sense. I still feel like something’s not right, but maybe I’m just looking for little tells you’ve put in your other stories when the main characters get captured/executed that aren’t there in this one, and that’s throwing me off.

@ellette-giselle

What… who gave you a gun, anyway? This is a medieval world. The best you should have is a sword.

@ellette-giselle

*inches closer to Leon and Rolf while you’re distracted*

@ellette-giselle

I’m not sure if this is what it is, but you said the Empire doesn’t take its own people to be slaves, yet there are two Imperials in the “care” (read as “horrific torture” lol) of a slave trader (that might not even be Imperial?) I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious. The soldier that’s bribed into…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yep!

@ellette-giselle honestly hybridlore’s got a point. It happened as a result of their faith, yes, but it’s been long enough in the story that readers might not be paying attention to that. Also, no one’s brought up why they were captured. I’ll get into that more once I’m finished with math work so hold on a sec. I’m not against what’s about to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

True, but it’s not like, direct. Idk.

@ellette-giselle

Wouldn’t their deaths right now be kind of disappointing? They wouldn’t even die for their faith or anything. . . just . . . a grudge. For abolishing the slave trade.

@ellette-giselle

Yes… no… yes…

If you seriously kill them… 😫

@ellette-giselle

Wyoh strikes again 😣 I didn’t get tagged.

It was a necessary act of terrorism.

But… now how are we going to save Leon and Rolf? 😢😢

@ellette-giselle

I got one across the arm on accident and that thing scared for almost a year!

Woah…um…do I want to ask this?…yes…I will…

So, uh, who whipped you?

@ellette-giselle

*gasp of horror*

Well at least it’s spelled differently and your father is not Arab. (right?)

Right! He’s not Arab…but half Turkish.

Goodness! The amount of names of family members I’ve used? *faints*

My goodness. Poor you!

Hey! You are looking at the wrong person! I didn’t hit Rolf with a horsewhip!

I know, I know…

I mean,…

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@ellette-giselle

Nearby, he saw Rolf lying on his side, his shoulders jerking with silent, tearless sobs. Leon couldn’t blame him.

😭😭😭

@ellette-giselle

Okay. I’ll mention the ink just for you.

Aw. Thanks!🥰

you might not see one of them ever again.

WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NONONONONONO!! Okay, if you have to kill one of them…pick Roland…please…I already like Rolf way too much since he got whipped in the face…and I now know a character who understands what that feels like…

@liberty

Ohh… that sounds painful. How did the cow hit you?

@ellette-giselle

… touché.

@ellette-giselle

Hassan struck him across the face with his horse whip. Rolf bent, gasping from the pain, his hand pressed to his face.

OH MY GOSH!!!!! OW. OW. OW!!!

I know that’s like!! Except a cow delivered the lash to my face…

I can totally feel what Rolf’s feeling right then!!! *sob* SO cruel, Ellette!!!! Do you have any idea how much p…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

 “There is only one god you need to worry about, and that is me: Hassan Salim.

You’ve got to be joking. Hassan is my father’s name…only it’s written with one “s”: Hasan.

@ellette-giselle

I seem to recall it was you who invited me here. 🧐 XD

Poor fake Alec. At least fake Leon and Rolf get their freedom. 🤣

@ellette-giselle

Nooo….. they are brought in by the traders. People of the Empire are NEVER sold as slaves

Maybe saying something about that, then? I wasn’t sure if the people were a different people group. I would think they look different than Aryan..because that’s what the People of the Empire are.

Does it need to?

I think it may be good to m…[Read more]