Ellette Giselle

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@ellette-giselle lol

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Oh, okay. Out of how many pages total?

And are these Word/Docs pages, or like actual book pages?

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Augghhhhh.

Wow, this book felt way shorter than the second one. Is that the case, or was it just me?

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Please tell me you’re not really going to kill him off.

Also, if Albee is the one to tell him, then we don’t get to see what happens. 🙁

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*sputters* Then how is Ian ever going to become a Christian? Leon won’t be there to explain it to him, and he probably hasn’t even listened the whole time!

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ELLETTE. You can not leave me like that. Leon can’t die now!

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Here’s the drawing I was going to post yesterday

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Great section! I too loved the part where they told the children about Jesus. I’m excited to see if/how Leon reaches Ian.

@ellette-giselle it’s doing it to me right now, how about you?

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Barnes found him dead.

I thiiiiink he was just unconscious, but I don’t remember

@rae

Oh, the creep definitely was, even if he didn’t realize it. His actions were begging for retribution.

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Not like Rory didn’t practically kill an Agent in that alley, if I remember aright. XD

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shooting stones

Do you have an actual game this is based off?

“A story of a great warrior hero who loves children and saves his bride,” Julian repeated. He looked at Roland who gave him a smile. “I think I know just the story.”

Aww!!!😍 I love this part!

“You do that,” Aelic replied coldly.

I’m pretty sure Aelic is remembering…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle exactly!

@ellette-giselle You wrote children as, well, children. It’s the same in your other books.

So many writers write kids as if they’re little adults.

@ellette-giselle yes!

That was a great little addition and helped me get even more immersed in the world.

@ellette-giselle I love how they shared the gospel with the children by telling them stories, and then explaining that the stories were true! That was probably my favorite part of this section.

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I totally thought you’d be at me for separating them, but I guess you didn’t mind Rolf dropping out of the book.

I was devastated, but it works better with them getting split apart.

So, Rolf never shows up again?

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Awesome, thank you!!

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New chapter is out!