Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle I can understand the raining part lol. Me, I actually like it when it’s raining, but the humidity that comes afterward plus the frequent 80-90 degree weather is not fun at all.

@ellette-giselle not gonna lie, I’ve never seen you as….as…. *gestures to your depressed posts* this. Critics are likely gonna say way worse about your book, and won’t be as nice as Linus or any of the rest of us about it. It’s just the life of an author.

Also, remember, you can say no to feedback. If you don’t agree with something he said,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

 I wonder……. these books were written so long ago and comparing them to the stuff I have written now, they’re just not as good at all.

I feel you. I look back at some of my old work and I’m like “I wrote this??? Sheesh, this is terrible!”

But then sometimes I look back at my old work and I’m like “With a little reworking, this c…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yikes! Bad Smaug!

btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?

I suppose you could start earlier.

@ellette-giselle

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That’s a messy looking link, that is. You should click on it. It might contains some Book feedback!!

Hopefully, Microsoft Word is still acceptable.

I didn’t get around to rereading the book this time. But this is what my thoughts…[Read more]

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle

Yay! Glad y’all like it! The next chapter is coming, bit by bit. We’ve actually been looking forward to it for months. XD

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Leo

“We’re going to fix this tile.”

He opened the bottle of sealant and carefully poured it into the cracks between shards. It pooled over the tile in a nice, whitish gloup. Using a paint scraper from his belt, Leo spread the stuff out until both broken tiles were covered in an even layer.

“This stuff will set up hard as steel…[Read more]

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Leo

“Ah! Many thanks. You didn’t cut yourself, did you?”

Rory looked down at his gloved hands and shrugged. Leo carefully picked up the shard. It slipped in place, filling the largest gap.

Maybe he wouldn’t need aluminum alloy after all. Which was good. He’d have had to leave Rory here guarding their work to go find some, and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yes actual killing please.

lol no I’m actually serious. This isn’t the rp for that.

@elishavet-pidyon Yeah Hugo caught back up with them. He was only gone for like a minute. I’m not sure what to write for that group rn, sorry.

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Leo

“Eh, maybe.” He looked up, eyebrows bunching together. “Except the plan is to get everything to fit perfectly together. So, maybe.”

He settled another piece in place. One tile was coming together quite nicely.

“I’d think of it more like fitting a bomb shell with it’s cordinants. All the bits have to be just so, or your…[Read more]

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Leo

“Good question.” He sat back on his heels and reached for another broken piece. “I think it’s some sort of game, or at least that’s what a friend of mine said. You have a picture that’s been cut up into a lot of pieces, and you have to put the pieces together to see the full picture. Or something like that.”

He rearranged…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ooooh, you’re cruel. Tossing that out there like that after I’ve already fallen for this character and everything. *Turns my glare on you*

XD

Leo

The two tiles had broken up, pieces scattered across the hallway. Leo knelt to pick up a piece. It’s edge was rough, sharp enough to cut skin. Porcelain then. Although it had been…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh gracious. XD

@ellette-giselle

Oooof…no…*glared at Wyoh*

I’ll probably zip them off somewhere to *ahem* illustrate Leoron’s interesting fixing methods.

Rory is not fine, he has broken ribs and a cracked knee, and no you don’t build immunity to broken bones. XD

@ellette-giselle

Well…

Since you’re helping out with the Susan story, you saw how I typically plot, and um…I’m almost done with his plot diagram…so now actual scene writing is supposed to start…

@ellette-giselle

Oh yes. The Button. XD

(I think It’s your turn? But I can go ahead and just scoot them off to some new assignment if you want.)

Or….. I could call the agents back and have them deal with him…….

or you could bring in a rebel captain to look over the place. Say they’ve driven the agents out of the school for a time. am totall…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yay! Thank you. They will now be highlighted on my playlist sheet.

(I’m actually considering having him play a type of guitar. Like, just a random thing to throw into his character. It’s so different from the aesthetic of the book [space outlaws and warring gangs aren’t very “calm guitar”ish], but he just seems like the kind of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yay! Was there a song that really seemed to fit him? I trying to find one that’s his theme song, XD

(Also, the Sounds of Power music is thanks to my brother for sharing with me)

@ellette-giselle

Thought you might be interested. Here’s the playlist I randomly decided to compile for Leo’s story (CotR)

Instrumental – aesthetic music

From “Sounds of Power” Epic instrumental

• “Faith”
• “The Key”
• “Got Fight”
• “Courage”

From Emily Black’s “Cloak of the Light” sound track

• “The Fine Art of Sarcasm”
• “Chicago”
• “Be…

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@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 12 out now!

I was talking to my sister last night about the story, and we decided on a couple of things that would make us both more comfortable reading and writing in the story, which would also make things less awkward for the characters. However, I still will not rewrite…[Read more]