Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

Ahh, that makes sense.

Also, really appreciate the interesting hem on his hood, and I didn’t know they used spandex fabrics in the empire. Lol. These are things I notice. XD

(And why a short clip of The Chosen I saw drove me absolutely batty. I may have to limit my history hobbies for my own sanity. *Sigh*)

XD

@ellette-giselle

Interested in which new guy? The prince or Marius.

 

Again, which kid? The prince, or Marius?

Um, both? Seriously, the possibilities I’m the next few chapters are very concerning to my author mind.

And with what those two kids have been through?! Already? And you haven’t even had much time to beat them up either, no offense.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

yeah, thanks for stating the obvious. 😂

It’s a skill of mine.

Does that mean it was good or bad?

I’m not sure. I haven’t put much thought into weather bribing is good or bad. All I know, it that I don’t like being bribed, and if you try to bribe me, I will only grow more stubborn.

yeah. Why? (About Wolf)

That’s kinda cool. Though…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oooooo, dark and secretive taken quite literally I see. Very interested in this new character guy. Not surprised the poor kid got hurt.

Where’s this face claim? O.O

And sure! I’m always up to listening through people’s playlists (and maybe borrowing music from time to time).

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I might send Rax in there to deal with Mateo if Mateo start throwing bombs 😁

@ellette-giselle

Okay. I’m back again. [Only about a month left of busy school days and awkward schedules.] I should hopefully have more time next week. Now I have to remember which sections I haven’t given you feedback on.

I think the first one was when Leon and Rolf are reunited.

I think the change in point of view works there.

Conrad covered…

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@ellette-giselle

I died.

mission accomplished 😁

@ellette-giselle

Also, I am dying for a protective older brother moment somewhere. 😂

I’ll see if I can put that in there somewhere… I’m sure there’ll be an opportunity. 😉😊

Liam totally counts, I just forgot him. 😢

@theshadow

Great!

Also… don’t hurt Everett please!!

Lol. Three of them want me to make him suffer 🤨 My plan hasn’t changed, though. There are challenges ahead, but more for Sara and Cole. And Alec.

@ellette-giselle

*smiles and nods* yes, put those characters through the fire, and we’ll see on the other side who were the true ones, and who wer…

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@ellette-giselle

Use the dash if you want it to read as a sudden horrifying shock, use the dots if you want it to be a slow realization that settles into horror.

Ah, okay that works better. Thanks!

I have been swamped lately, but we’ll see if I can have her to you this week.

Take your time! Thanks for the comments, I’m glad the chapter gave som…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

I count six that Ellette has killed… but pretty much everyone in her books has almost died at least once. 

I want to see him put to the test, and I want to see him face consequences for that choice, even though he chose the right thing, and I want to watch him struggle through and stand firm in that!

 

I just want yo…

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@ellette-giselle

It could also be said Helen with the “e” still added.

Phew! I’m so relieved.

Shy. Rather a bit of a coward sometimes. Didn’t want to ever draw attention to himself. Relied on Julian as spokesman and decision maker. Very quiet. Never, ever did anything that went against what others were doing.

Interesting! My Adrian is kind of li…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I wish I was athletic? XD

I like the slight burn that comes from steady running, but side pain tends to come first. I like to bike and hike, but (as some already mentioned) I’m in school and working a desk job. Which means most of the steady exercise I get is daily five-ten minute power walks crossing campus between classes.

As…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I forgot…is Leon and Julian writing in the same journal? Or do they each have their own?

@ellette-giselle

Good morning!!! You’re bright and early! Normally Hybridlore is my first reader. Looks like you got her place! 😂

😄

Oh wait…Helene is said like He-leen?

Oh, come on! Adrian wasn’t always dead. I would like to know what he was like when he was alive on earth.

Speaking of Adrians, have you ever read “Lysbeth”?
No! What’…

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@ellette-giselle

Soccer is fun. I always understood kickball more, but I have a friend who was a goalie for years. It’s very much a thing in Hispanic culture, so we see a lot of it.

I’m personally not super sporty. I live in college football country, but it’s possibly my least favorite sport. I like badminton though, and pingpong, and kinda…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yay, the bonus section!! XD

The part where Julian says he has to stay in his room and then two sentences later says he might go downstairs was a little confusing.

I thought he was going to be sick for longer than that—I don’t know, just seemed like something you would do.

Nice to see Joseph and his family mentioned again. I m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I live in Florida! There’s like 0 mountains here! And barely any fields that aren’t either dangerous-insect-infested or wet and full of either alligators or the deadliest bacteria and amoebas out there.

NGL Florida is micro-Australia when it comes to that area of life.

My brother has two airsoft guns, but we…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle let me think……

I think it’s closer to ten actually.

It’s not so much the count as how close they are to each other. And everyone being dramatic about them, although that part isn’t exactly your fault lol