Ellette Giselle

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“I wonder what they’re doing,” he muttered. He began to wonder how the villagers planned to kill them, and a shudder ran down his spine.

This looks like the sort of thing you type ‘2’ at in my stuff.

Good-bye, Aelic.

Not sense Aaron and Adrian have I seen anyone die with such courage,”

*Since

Rejoice with Him, O heavens…

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@ellette-giselle Well I think it’s great so far, so yep, you did your job.

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ohhhh.

By Draft 4 pretty much everything is solidified, right?

And I don’t mean “don’t make them die through the entire story,” just “don’t kill them this early in the book without a good replacement.”

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Hmm. We’ll have to see.

What draft is this? If this is a first or second draft I could forgive you for killing them off and yeeting us into some random’s POV, cause it’s still rough and maybe you just figured out that killing them works for the story. But if it’s the final draft, almost ready for publishing, and you did that, I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I read the section! Good to have the characters remember past events.

Also, I agree with Linus, I think they’re gonna live (or at least Leon and Julian will, Aelic could die or he could live); it seems a little early to kill these characters off, especially since you’ve provided no real replacement protagonists.

@ellette-giselle I’m def gonna have to catch up on the sections😅🫶

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Anyone wanna read a little sneak peek into one of my main projects? 🤭🫶

It was finally the day that marked exactly a year since Aodhán had perished.

Michael Bréagach pulled at a loose string on the s…

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@ellette-giselle not yet!! I just happened to see Linus’s reply while I was going through my emails. I’m doing animation work right now, but my “work” computer and my normal computer have the same email. I’ll read it when I’m on my other computer.

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Lolol.

@ellette-giselle yep, that’s a perfect name for the character in the image.

It just…fits her.

@ellette-giselle That’s what I thought, it sounds like a girl’s name.

also that meme is peak humor lol

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Haha! I like Aelic too, but I really liked how you put us more in Julian’s mind than we normally get to be.

I’m like 95% sure they’re going to survive.

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🙄 Ugh.

But why? 😭

I wanna do whatever I want. I is the author.

Do you have your Literary Licence from Bagsworth Books like Bastille?

Does this mean you think they’re gonna get out of this one alive?

I think so. It’s still early in the book. You could kill them all off and switch to a different character at this point as the p…[Read more]

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why?

For the reason Leon mentioned. Reflexes happening faster than recognition.

The next morning, Julian woke to the sound of voices and banging. He leapt to his feet and yanked on his boots. Leon was already pulling on his hat and beat him into the other room.

When Julian arrived, he found Martin, Aelic, Leon, and Aiden all…

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Love this section! You did a great job of bringing in Julian’s character and his thoughts, like when he remembered the burning building. Their last exchange is so funny. XD

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New chapters on the Part 2 doc!

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So, the five set off for Dietenbruck.

I think you are pacing this well for a return journey

“If I was an enemy, you’d both be dead,” a voice laughed softly from behind.

Leon and Julian whipped about to see Aelic standing in the shadows.

Sneaky. But not wise.

Good section!

@ellette-giselle great job on this section!!

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I feel like they’re not going to be happy. Particularly with Aelic.

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I’m worried for Aelic…