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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle I can see that.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle wow….interesting section! I feel a bit bad for the one who believed right before the priest slashed his throat. But I agree with Leon, the sadness is tempered by the fact that they are in the presence of God Himself now.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh really? I love them. It’s so fun to start tying them together in subtle ways.
Oh don’t get me wrong, I still love it.

And neither of the two guys have met. 😂
And that’s when things get fun, when characters are technically connected but they haven’t met yet
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 23!
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Multiple POVs are lowkey traumatizing for my brain because you have to tie so many different colored strings together. It’s madness. Madness, I tell yea.
Escape while you still can… *Gazes into the distance* *Flops face down into my pile of manuscripts*
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
But it’s a three-way POV, so there are two other MCs.
Three-way POVs for the win. 🙃 I’m doing the same thing with my dream project. It’s so complex though, takes forever to figure out. But it is easier to make one MC less likable and tuck their POV under the rug until they’ve developed enough to root for.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
I’m just going to let him grow on people as the story goes.
That makes sense. Is he a side character? I feel as if side characters are given more grace when it comes to these things because the story’s POV doesn’t depend on them. Protagonists with that personality are more difficult because readers don’t want to deal with that r…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
My older sister is a graduate student there, so yes, but no, my twin is going somewhere else.
*Mournful sigh*
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
It’s close enough to commute, about 40 minutes one way (so not amazing, but not bad).
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Anything to add to Koshka? Since you sorely desired to smack my character, hehe
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Wow. That was rough.
Poor Aelic. 😭
(I’m wondering what’s happening to Aiden now that Martin believed and died too. It would have been tough to see his brother and his cousin killed like that.)
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
O.O
Yeah, entering finals and graduation, then transferring to a university for next fall.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
🤣🤣🤣
Okay, he’s like that because his dad has always been very intense about making the right decisions in life, and the character (his name is Pilgrim) has developed a very hyperfixated way of making sure he doesn’t put himself out there.
I think what makes Pilgrim tolerable as a character is that he is very calm visibly, and…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Hopefully not? But right now…maybe.
*Deep sigh of weariness*
Life is nuts right now. So yeah, it might take something kinda out there to stop my in my hamster wheel of days.
I should be back to something like normal in…two weeks?
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle You two are on. 🙂 Any ideas? ^
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
He keeps dying.
WHAT!?! XD
First you kill all my favorite of your own characters, and now you’re killing mine!
LOL
Okay, where were we?
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay.
I liked Aelic.
And I am now…mmmm.
*Glares*
I was honestly hoping Leon would somehow be able to take his place, even though I like Leon.
Besides my unhappiness over what happened, nice gut punch at the end. And um…
Honestly, this kid’s writer feels kinda sick after that, so she’s going to just step back and let…[Read more]
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