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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
what?!
Like I said, yesterday was ironic.
Anyways. History lesson.
Aggressive people do not mix with stallions.
Okay, those explanations make sense.
I guess I refer to Daniel’s friends that way because that’s the way I always do in my mind. They are actually refereed to more in that way then by their Babylonian names, It’s just…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle
It’s Tuesday! I have two new chapters for you guys.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Congratulations on your graduation!
I was gonna give people a chance to catch up
Sorry, it was a busy weekend and yesterday was rather ironic. It was a holiday yesterday, so I had to work for most of it and I spent at least an hour cleaning soap. Who thought that soap needed to be cleaned? Anyway, I’ll get into the feedback…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
You’re really just going to leave me hanging like that?? 😳
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
About a year ago, I was finishing up my senior year of high school, and as a part of my writing class, I finally wrote and finished a story of decent length. The accountability of that class really helped me get my writing done. I haven’t done much since then, (although largely because of college), and I would love to get some good writing done…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
I never color the original, I like to keep a backup.
That’s the true advice.
YES!!! DO!!!
I’ll see to finishing it when I get home, then. XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper
Well, I guess it’s a go for finalizing the sketch and then coloring it. I have a few coloring choices I’m deciding on. I might add a starry backdrop, and make his hair silver, or just do like it’s daytime. That’s why the top part of the page is devoid of anything at the moment.
Tbh, after an experience…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago

Really sorry for the bad quality. The splotch by his mouth is not supposed to be there btw. This is my sketch so far for Baron. I’ve gone through many different poses, and was wondering for feedback, how good is this?
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@rae @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Thanks!
I should draw Baron sometime soon here…
oh yes pls do
The way you phrase that sounds like it’s not up for discussion
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Nope. XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yes, I did—I think I responded? Unless I didn’t send it?
It’s cool. I had no idea what it meant until I read the rest of it though. XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
That’s so exciting!!!! Congratulations!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yay!! I was getting a little worried 😅
Have you graduated yet, by the way? (Congrats if you did!)
This section was good. I think you did a good job of showing the horror of the University executions without making it too descriptive *shudders*
Leon ran the other way, and Julian turned and scrambled down the street nearest to…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle oh yeah forgot lol
but it was also the first book, so a cliffhanger like that is ok. Never mind lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I predict that at least a few of them will be thrown into the games. They did that a lot in the Roman days.
if this is the last book though, it wouldn’t be very wise to end it on “they all died in the games” and not have something good come out of it. Even book one with Aaron’s death had a “good ending” because shortly aft…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 28 out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
No new sections?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
My dad actually hasn’t read these ones yet. It’s more the word “sermon” that’s a knee-jerk reaction and less the actual content. I’m completely behind what I write, it’s just more the idea of “writing a sermon”. If that makes sense…….
Got it.
That depends on the word. In this case, this name is said V-ī-ss. Like vice. In fact, th…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
What I’m asking is, as readers, did you get anything out of this in this book at this time in this place, or did you just read it more to get over it to the next part of the story?
I agree with Keilah and Linus—I think you should leave it in, but maybe have Julian encourage the believers more by reminding them of their future hope.
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