Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

why?

For the reason Leon mentioned. Reflexes happening faster than recognition.

The next morning, Julian woke to the sound of voices and banging. He leapt to his feet and yanked on his boots. Leon was already pulling on his hat and beat him into the other room.

When Julian arrived, he found Martin, Aelic, Leon, and Aiden all…

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@ellette-giselle

Love this section! You did a great job of bringing in Julian’s character and his thoughts, like when he remembered the burning building. Their last exchange is so funny. XD

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New chapters on the Part 2 doc!

@ellette-giselle

So, the five set off for Dietenbruck.

I think you are pacing this well for a return journey

“If I was an enemy, you’d both be dead,” a voice laughed softly from behind.

Leon and Julian whipped about to see Aelic standing in the shadows.

Sneaky. But not wise.

Good section!

@ellette-giselle great job on this section!!

@ellette-giselle

I feel like they’re not going to be happy. Particularly with Aelic.

@ellette-giselle

I’m worried for Aelic…

@ellette-giselle

Ahh! I love it! I’m glad they decided to go back to the village, but… 😬

@ellette-giselle

Thank you! 😊

@keilah-h

Thanks! It’s actually a joust of sorts. The prince and his companion were at the tilting yard with a seasoned knight. Something just went horribly wrong, and Deniz is going to try to stop a galloping horse.

@ellette-giselle

Okay!

@ellette-giselle

No, they haven’t traveled far enough for that to be a thing yet. So far they are all heading in the same direction together. That’s how I ended the last book. I can add some reminders though.

Ok, sounds good!

They actually left before that happened. (I said that in the last book) so they had no idea what even happened in the Cap…

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Chapter 22 out!

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Thanks! I might draw her more. She’s fun. I named her Bubble.

@keilah

lol, what game is it?

@ellette-giselle

I like it where it is as it is sort of the first rush of the downhill slide we’re about to hit.

Oh no.

@ellette-giselle

🤦🏼‍♀️

It’s the gang, y’all. The same gang from last book. The same gang we left at the end of the last book and are now picking up and the beginning of the next.

Do I really gotta remind the reader?

In the previous books in the series, the POV characters switched every time. Especially with the way that you left off the last boo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It’s the gang, y’all. The same gang from last book. The same gang we left at the end of the last book and are now picking up and the beginning of the next.
Do I really gotta remind the reader?

Yes, because some of us are too stoopid to remember. Also, I thought some of them might have gone separate ways, which can often happen in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle hehe, ok then🤭

(not a finished scene btw, but a snippet)

The Schind family looked exhausted, barely awake.

Not that Leon doubted that he probably looked much the same.

Thoughts of Germany had reawakened thoughts, memories, and even nightmares that plagued his sleep and sometimes even his waking moments.

He shifted on the…

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@ellette-giselle hehe thank youuuu🤭

and no, this is actually a section from The Bois’ book🫶😂

(and I’ll fix those typos, this was completely unedited, so😂)

tho I could share a snippet from Book 3 if you wanted👀

@ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk

I love them y’all😭🫶

So much had crumbled.

So many lives had been lost.

Leo sank against the wall, fists clenching and unclenching, every breath heavy, tears blurring his vision.

Dietrich…Fin…so many lives had been lost.

And Eze…

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@ellette-giselle haha I’m glad you like my commentary😂