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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
O.O
Yeah, entering finals and graduation, then transferring to a university for next fall.
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year ago
🤣🤣🤣
Okay, he’s like that because his dad has always been very intense about making the right decisions in life, and the character (his name is Pilgrim) has developed a very hyperfixated way of making sure he doesn’t put himself out there.
I think what makes Pilgrim tolerable as a character is that he is very calm visibly, and…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Hopefully not? But right now…maybe.
*Deep sigh of weariness*
Life is nuts right now. So yeah, it might take something kinda out there to stop my in my hamster wheel of days.
I should be back to something like normal in…two weeks?
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle You two are on. 🙂 Any ideas? ^
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
He keeps dying.
WHAT!?! XD
First you kill all my favorite of your own characters, and now you’re killing mine!
LOL
Okay, where were we?
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Okay.
I liked Aelic.
And I am now…mmmm.
*Glares*
I was honestly hoping Leon would somehow be able to take his place, even though I like Leon.
Besides my unhappiness over what happened, nice gut punch at the end. And um…
Honestly, this kid’s writer feels kinda sick after that, so she’s going to just step back and let…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
“I wonder what they’re doing,” he muttered. He began to wonder how the villagers planned to kill them, and a shudder ran down his spine.
This looks like the sort of thing you type ‘2’ at in my stuff.
Good-bye, Aelic.
Not sense Aaron and Adrian have I seen anyone die with such courage,”
*Since
Rejoice with Him, O heavens…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle Well I think it’s great so far, so yep, you did your job.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
ohhhh.
By Draft 4 pretty much everything is solidified, right?
And I don’t mean “don’t make them die through the entire story,” just “don’t kill them this early in the book without a good replacement.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Hmm. We’ll have to see.
What draft is this? If this is a first or second draft I could forgive you for killing them off and yeeting us into some random’s POV, cause it’s still rough and maybe you just figured out that killing them works for the story. But if it’s the final draft, almost ready for publishing, and you did that, I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle I read the section! Good to have the characters remember past events.
Also, I agree with Linus, I think they’re gonna live (or at least Leon and Julian will, Aelic could die or he could live); it seems a little early to kill these characters off, especially since you’ve provided no real replacement protagonists.
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freedom replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle I’m def gonna have to catch up on the sections😅🫶
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @rae @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk
Anyone wanna read a little sneak peek into one of my main projects? 🤭🫶
It was finally the day that marked exactly a year since Aodhán had perished.
Michael Bréagach pulled at a loose string on the s…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle not yet!! I just happened to see Linus’s reply while I was going through my emails. I’m doing animation work right now, but my “work” computer and my normal computer have the same email. I’ll read it when I’m on my other computer.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Lolol.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle That’s what I thought, it sounds like a girl’s name.
also that meme is peak humor lol
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Haha! I like Aelic too, but I really liked how you put us more in Julian’s mind than we normally get to be.
I’m like 95% sure they’re going to survive.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
🙄 Ugh.
But why? 😭
I wanna do whatever I want. I is the author.
Do you have your Literary Licence from Bagsworth Books like Bastille?
Does this mean you think they’re gonna get out of this one alive?
I think so. It’s still early in the book. You could kill them all off and switch to a different character at this point as the p…[Read more]
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