Ellette Giselle

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Okay, sorry for taking so long to get back to this. I have a google form here to figure out how to best organize this. Please fill this out, even if you are just planning on giving feedback.           …[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I would love to!

@ellette-giselle lol

I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.

@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I will try to get you some answers before too long

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Probably either Leon or Julian. I’m going to say Leon for this book.

~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

Umm . . . For some reason I’m thinking of Fox, since he was the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He ended up marrying the daughter of a farmer that he helped. Mercy grew up and married and had children, and so did most of the other children, though their fifth, Allan, died when he was fifteen.

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Thank you!

Also, Linus had a point. We never found out who wrote that note (I know you just said it was an acolyte, but maybe…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I’ll try to answer them after I eat breakfast.

Okay, I’m tempted to say something that’ll make y’all kill me.

Lemme guess. Questions for the overarching series or something like that?

@ellette-giselle

Thank YOU for all the help. All of you have been so kind and helpful. Never could have rewritten this without help.

Your welcome! Let me know one you have the feedback questions ready please!

@ellette-giselle

Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.

Or does that not work.

Still seems kind of ‘as you know’ish.

Something along those lines. What if he says ‘it was a painting from [_____]. Flavia loved the knight in it an…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I tried to send them to your emails. So for you, it’s the Proton one.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Okay, I’m sorry, that was a bit of a mess. I tried to send a Word document with the two new chapters in it because Ellette can’t do Google anymore. There are two (?) links I sent. The right one is the second one, without a message.

Hopefully this works.

@ellette-giselle that’s perfect, thanks!!

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I was going to say, I can probably switch them over to Word. I believe you can comment anonymously on there if you aren’t signed in. Just give me a couple minutes.

@ellette-giselle ^I second this.

@ellette-giselle

Huh. I don’t know how I could fix that.

I could open a section of it specifically for comments, and y’all could write them out instead of linking them to a specific section of text, but I feel like that might be more annoying for other people. Maybe I can copy any major ones over for you.

@ellette-giselle

Pretty please, with a cherry on top, tell me what happens to Joseph and his family. 🙃

@theducktator

Nice.

@ducktator @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint

New chapters are out. I wrote this week, so I feel like I have enough room to give you guys two.

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

It might have just been something I thought, then. Not that I was saying it was totally unrealistic—I just know that last-minute conversions tend to be less … I don’t know.

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore

I honestly have no idea on what my views on this whole election thing are. But I didn’t see Rowan’s conversion to be like, fake or forced or whatever.

The example of that criminal on the cross in the Bible, that happened, so I mean why can’t this one? Y’know?