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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.
It is a neat world, and the artwork is very good (though I wouldn’t recommend looking the artis…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool.
Okay. Glad to hear that!
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator
Chapter 33 out!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I put the chapter on the drive yesterday, but ran out of time to let people know about it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.
One note: I was very…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Signing in for the long haul. I can look for rogue grammar and suspicious word choices.
Code key: nuanced syntax.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through? -
Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Agreed. We could let it move at whatever pace it can without needing to flip back 392764683 pages.
Yes! I haven’t had time to open it up yet (word is on the computer) but I’m hoping to in the next hour (we got an extended lunch break today!!!!).
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh no! No one was hurt though?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Crashed? Like a vehicle accident?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Understandable. With the weddings and grad’s you’ve had, I know it can be hard to find the time.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @grcr @the_lost-journal @hybridlore @theducktator @stephie
Hey, are any of you still reading through my sister’s book?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 32 out!
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Yes!!
Maybe we should throw them together in an RP…but I don’t really have time right now for a real one. *Gazes forlornly at the Fantasy School*
Maybe in an email thread. That way we don’t have to work with a school system or wander a Castle.
Hmm. If we both have time (which is a very big if). Otherwise they can just hear…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
You might want to see these.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Wait until I am back on please.
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