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The Ducktator replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I’ll be your grammer Nazi!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
Heehee thanks!! 😊
Nothing too interesting actually… lil boy is a foodie, so I wanted him in some kind of restaurant shirt, but I didn’t want to use a real restaurant (mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have).
I guess there is a food truck in, like, the UK or something called the flying fry…[Read more] -
-GRCR- replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Oh wait is this the book you had started sharing in the Chat Chata while back? That I was reading?
I’ll try to help where I can… I’m not the greatest at editing… or giving feedback… but I’ll do what I can, whenever I have a moment.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle and anyone else
this is just for fun…takes place several years before Freedom’s Fire takes place…and ugh I love it so much😭🫶🏻😂
She ensured Wolfgang and Lee were close enough to get to in case there was an emergency, but not close enough to the creek to get wet.
Reuben tugged on her dress. “Help?”
Eleanor kicked off…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @grcr @rae @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-idk-lol
anyone want a few little snippets from something I’m writing for fun…that probably won’t ever make it into a book but I’m writing it anyways?? 😂
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freedom replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle it’s not much different, haha, mostly just fixing the formatting issues and some grammar and things since a friend offered to be my editor this time🥳
oh and probably a new cover that matches with Broken Shackles more🤭
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freedom replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle I am insanely busy working with other authors and their project(s) right now😭 (as well as finalizing details for the re-release/2nd edition of Freedom’s Fire…shhh🫢)
I wish I could help, but I don’t want to be too swamped😅 it looks super cool though, and I hope you get the help you need!!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @rae @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
I think at least some of you submitted right away, but unfortunately, I accidentally messed up the form, so it didn’t give you the right questions. I fixed it now, so if anyone who hasn’t redone it yet could re-submit, that would be great. My bad! Sorry for the inconvenience.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter the 31st out!
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Linus Smallprint started the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Hello everyone! I had an idea for a different project than intrigued me enough that I felt the need write it down. This doesn’t happen very often to me. In fact, I think the series I am currently writing, The Narrow Path Trilogy, it the only other idea I have had. So I had to put working on TNPT Book II aside this week and jot down this scene and…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.
I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
The thing is I relise I’ve been spending way too much time on the computer and my phone recently. I think I need to take a break. So the plan is, once I am done the draft of my current work in progress, to take a step back from electronics for a bit and actually do some real things, like touch grass again. (Ah… grass…). For…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*
*Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*
I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.
You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @rae @theducktator @loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @savannah_grace2009
Okay, sorry for taking so long to get back to this. I have a google form here to figure out how to best organize this. Please fill this out, even if you are just planning on giving feedback. …[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I would love to!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle lol
I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Okay, I will try to get you some answers before too long
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