Ellette Giselle

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I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.

One note: I was very…[Read more]

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Signing in for the long haul. I can look for rogue grammar and suspicious word choices.

Code key: nuanced syntax.

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Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?

@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?

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Agreed. We could let it move at whatever pace it can without needing to flip back 392764683 pages.

Yes! I haven’t had time to open it up yet (word is on the computer) but I’m hoping to in the next hour (we got an extended lunch break today!!!!).

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Oh no! No one was hurt though?

@ellette-giselle

Crashed? Like a vehicle accident?

@ellette-giselle

Understandable. With the weddings and grad’s you’ve had, I know it can be hard to find the time.

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @grcr @the_lost-journal @hybridlore @theducktator @stephie

Hey, are any of you still reading through my sister’s book?

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 32 out!

@ellette-giselle

Yes!!

Maybe we should throw them together in an RP…but I don’t really have time right now for a real one. *Gazes forlornly at the Fantasy School*

Maybe in an email thread. That way we don’t have to work with a school system or wander a Castle.

Hmm. If we both have time (which is a very big if). Otherwise they can just hear…[Read more]

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You might want to see these.

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Wait until I am back on please.

@ellette-giselle

Ah yes, I remember the first couple of chapters of this on in The Chat Chat.

But yeah, I’m going to be taking a break from my computer after I finish the draft of my current project. But once I am done my break I will let you know and can help out from there.

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Okay, it looks like the most popular time to start is the 14th, 15th, or 16th, so would everyone be cool with the 16th being our start date? (That’s two weeks from yesterday.) This would mean if you’re…[Read more]

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You may inform the secretary that the assignment which was offered to Agent Kitty has been accepted.

(Lovely aesthetics, all. Definitely looking forward to meeting these characters [Gahhh, the number tattoos…])

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!

@ellette-giselle I’m up for grammar/spellcheck!

Also to figure out what it was your siblings loved so much about the book.

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I’ll be your grammer Nazi!

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Heehee thanks!! 😊

@whalekeeper

Nothing too interesting actually… lil boy is a foodie, so I wanted him in some kind of restaurant shirt, but I didn’t want to use a real restaurant (mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have). I guess there is a food truck in, like, the UK or something called the flying fry…[Read more]