@ellette-giselle
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.
true, but even if you change it to another female name they might still be after you.
Ehh, just
Any thoughts on this whole “White Knight” business?
hmm? I must’ve missed that chapter (happens sometimes), how far back is it so I can read through it?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name)
I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.
Pleading medical or religious exemption (if the country has…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Well, I’m glad it comes through! I don’t even know what I’m doing… I just pray and try to picture it.
Okay, good. I was trying to put foreshadowing and hints in the chapters before so that it’d all make sense, but since the story was still forming at some stages (Chapter 4, I think, the one where Alec comes home for dinner, n…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Aw, Ellette, I don’t even really know what to say. I’m so, so glad you like it! Thank you for all the encouragement!
I want this made into a MOVIE!!
Every author’s not-so-secret dream xD
Yeah, poor Everett. It’d be a challenge for sure.
So… was it obvious before this chapter what Alec did for his job? Do you feel like you have…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @theducktator @keilah-h @theshadow @anyone-else
Thank you everyone for your comments on the doc!!
The reason I haven’t added anything new is because I moved it all to Reedsy. Reedsy will professionally typeset it all, and have a more professional look to it, and I like Reedsy better for writing.
The point of…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
KP is breaking on my phone. I got emailed for that but when I clicked on it, it did not show your post. Now I’m on my laptop, and somehow it shows it now. 🤔
“What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*
Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly kill…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD
@shadow @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theducktator @savannah-grace2009 @sorry-if-i-forgot-anyone-😢
Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
I’m shaking my head at you right now.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.
You 100% are!!
Nice. 😎
I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
You have no ide…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.
since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.
When did Leon start calli…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 months ago
That is not the case. I was signed out when I watched that video. My normal recommendations are:
Minecraft videos (but like, non-stupid stuff), Mystery videos or cold cases, Animals or seals, funny skits, and music. But all of that is normal. I would never watch… whatever that stuff is….
For me it usually does 🎭…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Probably not, I guess I just missed that.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
ack, yes, I missed a word there. When I read it over my brain said it was there. XD
XD Yep, happens to me too.
Okay, so Julian was about 17-19 in Joseph’s book (I never specified) which makes him in his late twenties now. Leon is a few years older so late twenties to very early thirties.
Rolf and Roland are around 19-25
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 months ago
It WAS funny… but I for some reason was recommend the most disturbing stuff…
Here it is:
LIKE WHAT ON GOD’S BEAUTIFUL EARTH ARE THSOE THUMB NAILS?! Why is bluey in a toilet? Why is there Minecraft dogman? Why is there pink and gray Nutella? What is Amy rose and sonic the hedgehog doing?! why is there a tiny house?! I HAVE…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Sorry, for some reason I didn’t get an email for this. 🙁
Good section! I like Julian’s reaction to Leon being the White Knight, and how they resolve their argument.
Julian raised an eyebrow. “I think that’s about the first time you have ever admitted I was better at you than something.”
Lol.
He knew this room very well. Leon…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle AHAHAHAHAHA
*more wheezing laughter*
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Andrew replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle that hilarious XDXDXD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Yeah…I think mostly I need to write like two more pieces, and then it’s just editing the rest. So hopefully this is doable XDXD *hopefully**
I think I just need enthusiastic pep talking right now, but emailing would help a lot too!!!
That’s totally fine!!! Just don’t let me give up lollll
That’s the main thing I’m…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
@esther-c @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @raxforge @rae @freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @theducktator @theshadow @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @keilah-h @anyone-else-i’m-blanking
I’m doing something drastic.
Something crazy.
I suppose I shall start at the beginning…
Our youth…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 3 months, 1 week ago
Great, thank you! Do you want me to post references for the clothes?
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