Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

Aww. That was sweet.

Jim seemed nicer to Jonathan before these chapters, but I guess Jonathan was hidden and Jim didn’t have to worry about the others watching.

Did the gang have something to do with Jonathan’s parents dying?

@loopylin @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Yaay, I actually have a self-contained snippet to share. This is pre-teen Barnes, in case you’re not sure who she is.

The typewriter clicked to a stop, its keys fluttering up and down like the legs of an overturned insect. Lucille opened her eyes. The sun glared through her eyelashes, turning…

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@ellette-giselle

True, true. 😆

@ellette-giselle

Oh wow. So you wrote those two this morning?

Darn. This means I can’t ask for bonus chapters. 😢 XD

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a lot of drafts.

How far through this draft are you? Finished?

@ellette-giselle

You didn’t like it before? Lol.

So how much of this have you written?

It’ll be interesting to see what happens with Viper.

He’s a tough guy who takes in a little kid. Plus, he doesn’t seem to want to be there any more than Jonathan does.

@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome!

@ellette-giselle

I like Jim more and more…

Good chapters! I really like this book.

@ellette-giselle

IT”S TIME FOR FEEDBACK!

The dawn will come

Please remember this is my opinion. You do not have to take any advice I give. These are just thing that I think would be a good idea. Please let me know if you have any questions, or need clarification.

Thank you very much for allowing me to participate in this. It’s been fun reading…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thanks! You really should if you want to.

@ellette-giselle

😁 She’s my favorite character.

@grcr @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @rae @highscribeofaetherium @koshka

Reminder that the goal is to have outlines done by the end of Monday a week from today (if you are doing one.) I come with yet another boring form to fill out. This is to try to help organize feedback groups (since there are too many people for everyone to give…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 35th out!

At more chapters than the last book now. But not more words so far.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, have fun!

@ellette-giselle

Seriously got an attitude that might cover some seriousness.

Ohh, have fun!

I’ll probably not get to the chapters till Sunday, as today is a “clean half the campus” day between camps.

@ellette-giselle

Ooooooooo…

*Reads quotes*

*Stares at pictures*

*Nods to self*

Another poor kid, though this one has a serious attitude. Probably a rebel of some sort. Nice.

@ellette-giselle

All I know is one of us is right…

Lolol!

Great quotes. He seems to have a lot of personality. XD

@ellette-giselle

I’ll have to listen to it later with my headphones!

@ellette-giselle

Hah, yes!

Sure! By the way, I liked the moodboards you already posted. Amber’s was really pretty. *is now remembering that name, and wonders when she is coming into the story*

I see similarities between Joseph’s story and this one. It feels like we’re going to time jump (also, you said that this story is about a young man……[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

KP just ate my post and went really weird…

I like Jim a lot.

I knew his parents were going to die once they hid Jonathan, but before that, no.

Does the story time jump after this, or does the whole book happen when Jonathan is nine?

@ellette-giselle

Poor Jonathan… 😭😭😭

The chapters were really good.